[Report This]Date: July 18 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
She reminds me a little of my girlfriend monika, maybe ill wright a story bout her :p
[Report This]Date: July 18 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
She reminds me a little of my girlfriend monika, maybe ill wright a story bout her :p
[Report This]Date: July 17 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful story. Was one of the first pieces I've read in a long while that dabbled in the pyscological aspect of macro/microphilia. And I must say, I think this tale was pretty darn accurate. Because it's really true with people, how something that can start off utterly fascinating, can become little more casual entertainment, or even boredom. And it was this element of the story that I really loved.
Very well done! Can't wait to read more by you.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start! I would love to hear about some of her roleplaying with the toga! I'll bet a lot of people would really think that they were back in ancient Greece encountereing a Titan when she did this!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
One thing i would change about this is that she pulled Bobby's arms off before putting him inside her
but i loved how it was written as if she was talking to me, with things like 'sorry i'm getting off track' etc
Date: July 15 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Reasonably well written but also quite scary. Such a cruel woman. There was some speech hidden in the description so I should tell you it's best to have it on separate lines. Makes your story easier to read.