Date: July 27 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
@Jacksmith. Ashley would have turned out totally rotten if not for this event. People like her parents couldn't really love other people, not even their own daughter. Alison is a gentle person. Ashley would receive love liked she never had before and turn into a nice happy pet. Tony's case is hard. Being a pet can be fun, but not if you have family and friends worrying about you. Than it's creepy that a nice girl like Alison is keeping you from your loved ones, but with good reasons. That thought will cross her mind a lot.
Author's Response:
You're right that Ashley's parents are pretty heinous as individuals and, indeed, lack a lot of human traits, though I'd say they still do have room for love of their daughter, no matter how misplaced their other aims are. Really, everyone in this situation has it pretty rough, no matter how you slice it.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 20: Family Values
Good story. Shocking part where Anna breaks Ashley limbs to make a point and Tony will never see his friends and family again. Helen and Kevin have done horrible damage to Anna, Alison and Ashley. The relationship between Alison, Ashley and Tony will be an interesting one. Ashley got the best deal. She's alive and her bad parents are gone. Her life as a pet will be much better thanks to Alison.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Helen and Kevin definitely damaged them, or at least Anna. Interesting you say Ashley has it best, since her parents were killed and all, though they were pretty terrible people.
Date: June 10 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Welp I just realized I already reviewed this. Goes to show how much I love it
Author's Response: Haha. I appreciate your enthusiasm.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
You are a MASTER. Best story on the site. PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel. Please. Omg
Date: April 27 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
My favorite story on this site. The way Anna develops is absolute perfection. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Funny you should mention this; recently I've actually been putting more thought into a sequel. So you may see that eventually. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 12 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
yeah, it's dark thought but its fit Kevin's character + he saw how mad n insane Anna was when he saw his daughter got paralysed. and he dont want pet life for him n probably for his family.So he had only 1 way where he won over Anna. Write happy ending if you wants nobody can't force u!
Date: February 10 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
right, you have to be the only to be ok & happy with your stories. Plus your not a happy ending type writer lol. your realitic type n that is good thing! this is 1 of best i ever read stories bcz it's disturbing to see good person becoming a evil. However, I was wondering what happened if at last moment Kevin kill his wife n himself to avoid giving the money n living pet life! hehe Looking for TO 6 Updates
Author's Response:
I promise I do sometimes give my characters happy endings; this one just had to end the way it did because of what came before. That's a pretty dark thought about Kevin! There will be more TO6 very soon.
Date: February 09 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Yeah, Anna she's so doing all this for her daughter that she lost all humanity and got selfish like Kevin family almost. her revenge n anger become her insane
Author's Response:
I do agree with you there that Anna's anger took over. I would guess not all readers would agree with her actions at the end of the story, but I hope what came before can explain why she did it.
Date: February 09 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
waiting TO 6 update. I started reading this great story. As non english reader, I struggled to read in details but got the most part n whole script. I feel about sad the loss of humanity of Anna n her daughter and the Ashley's fate n tony's. I agree sadly there no room for a sequel as the pursuit of goal is achieved : justice.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I'd say Anna still has a shred of humanity somewhere, since she's mainly doing all this for her daughter, though she's definitely been corrupted by all of the nastiness.
Date: November 27 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
One of the BEST stories I have ever read. Thank you so much. This was a fantastic read. Truly appreciate the time and effort you put it. I'd have to say I think my favorite part was when the small female victim had to clean with her tongue the giant dirty, dingy, flithy white flip flop of her new owner.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I always enjoy hearing thoughts on my older stories. Glad the flip flop cleaning was as fun to read as it was to write. ;)
[Report This]Date: May 31 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I'll admit I stayed clear of this story for some time. The lack of any pleasant identifiers and knowing your writing style from your other stories, turned me off at the summary.
While looking for more GTS material over at deviantart, I encountered this story again. Being bored, I decided to read this, not expecting much. Though I found many of the things Anna and Allison did to their relatives terrible and disgusting, I found I didn't shed any tears when Kevin and Helen were killed in the end. The people I DO feel bad for is Ashley and Tony. They are young and innocent of any crime. The worse is that Ashley is a bitch, but that's a condition that can be fixed over time. Though I suspect that Tony won't receive any more ill treatment now that's he's Allison's "boyfriend", save for the more intimate stuff. I fear for Ashley. Anna broke both her arms and her legs and is in no hurry to get her any kind of medical care, even the amateur kind that Tony will probably have to do when they have time. That probably means that she'll probably spend the rest of her life in a wheelchair or on crutches. Besides having her life and future taken from her, when she finds out what her parents did to Tom and that they are now dead themselves, it'll crush her. I wonder if Anna and Allison will start treating her like family? The poor, disabled, helpless niece/cousin she now is. Maybe show some of that compassion that Tom was known for and that they strived for themselves? Might be some decent material for a short sequel where things aren't as heavy.
The writing was well done. Once I started reading, it grabbed my attention. Though I squirmed through many of the more violent moments, I was still engaged enough to continue reading. I'll give the story fairly high marks for the writing, but will lose some points due to some of the unanswered questions I mentioned above that could be solved with a couple more chapters or a short sequel.
Author's Response:
Thanks; I appreciate the detail of your thoughts, especially on something that isn't normally to your tastes. I'm not sure when a sequel would be done, but it would probably use that concept you mentioned about how Tom was known for his compassion and how Anna probably overstepped a line in pursuit of justice.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
Wow... BOTH her arms and BOTH her legs... Ouch.
AND she doesn't even know that her parents are dead... They'll have to break it to her.
Ive never seen something this bad happen to anyone in any other of your stories, why here? And why Ashley?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I guess I did it here because I wanted to be able to feel the really shocking finality that comes at the end of what initially feels like just a squabbling family's misunderstanding at the start of the story.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
Wow... BOTH her arms and BOTH her legs... Ouch.
AND she doesn't even know that her parents are dead... They'll have to break it to her.
Ive never seen something this bad happen to anyone in any other of your stories, why here? And why Ashley?
[Report This]Date: February 18 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Reviewing all these godlike stories in earnest. Expect maybe 2 or 3 more.
3 more thoughts.
1. This is my favorite story on the site. Period.
2. Alison = Greatest, domineering gts ever. Period.
3. Definitely consider a sequel. This story could definitely merit one.
Author's Response: Again, thanks. I'm flattered by such high praise for the story/Alison. There may be a sequel someday down the line, although my goal now is to slowly continue the 4 I already have going.
Date: January 28 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I agree with most people, this story deserves a spin off.
I need to learn to write like you. How did you become such a good writer? Did you write before GiantessWorld? I am writing my first story and I think it's decent, but this humbles almost everything and I'm trying to learn to write like this. Could you help? (just asking, no need to respond, it's just since you are the best (or one of them) I would ask for help from a master.)
Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you enjoy the writing. shoot me an email if you want, i'd be glad to offer a few tips
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Oh and I forgot to say this too. It may sound like what tons of past reviews have but what makes you great is the incredible liveliness of your stories. They feel so...real. Especially this one in my opinion. While Jack and Carly are excellent, this scenario is just absolutely real. It blows my mind how lifelike it is and what they do to the tiny relatives, employing just ordinary household items into a story, like the bathtub, a glass of wine, even a dirty flip flop for God's sake increased the liveliness of the story that much. We all try to achieve something like that but you do.
Author's Response:
thank you very much for your kind words! it's always fun for me to see that readers and fellow authors still enjoy my older stories. i always do my best to write stories that breathe, meaning i try to have those little personal character touches (as you mentioned) that most people don't really notice as well as the sticking close to reality, as those are the types of stories i like to read best from other authors. i hope you continue to share your thoughts on other stories.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Now an author myself I come back to review more seriously. What I like about your stories Jack is that you put in the little, very minor gestures or details slowly describing a person, or setting, or situation so that us readers are compiling these unimportant facts into the whole story as we read it. This is what puts you aside from almost every other author here. You are the only author I see that does ANYTHING like that.
And that makes you just about the best author on this site.
Date: November 28 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
This was my first story read and the best I think on this site. The ending shocked me cuz i m not into the gory crush but the keep forever as slave thing. It would be cool if you made a story but Ashley was giant and Alison small. And its an after this story. You though, are the best author by far.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked the story so much. i tend to prefer endings like that too, which was actually what made me more interested in going for a violent end, just to change things up a bit. most of my stories actually go more with an ending like you're describing
Date: November 27 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 20: Family Values
What an extremely fascinating story. When i left for work this morning i had to know how it would end. Fortunately i could read the rest of the story at work on my smartphone. I loved it. Now to the next of your stories.
Author's Response:
i'm glad you enjoyed it. i've appreciated your kind reviews on these earlier stories of mine.
Date: November 25 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 12: Cheeseburger with a Side of Cousin
No need, oh master, to thank us for reading another one of your amazing stories. Thank YOU for this wonderful gift!