Date: July 31 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Well what can i say i'm very impressed by your stories, this one is very good, i like the depth and the way its unfolding, if there was anything its pehaps that i would like a little more interaction between Kevin and Anna, a little more spice, its not a criticism you understand but personally i prefer the female - male interaction more but its a terrific story all the same but i'd like to see it sexed up just a little, but its very well done.
Author's Response:
perfectly understandable, the more extensive girl-girl interactions in this story were just me experimenting a bit, as what you've mentioned has been the center of my other stories. and sit tight, there will be some "sexing," as you say :)
[Report This]Date: July 31 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15: Close to the Chest
Great chapter. If Kevin wont give in after all he's been through Maybe Anna needs to get rough and break a bone or something, Maybe a finger or an arm or a leg. Nothing fatal. To really hurt him she could do it to his wife or daughter and make him watch while she does it. You asked for thoughts. Those are my thoughts :-)
Dave
Author's Response: hehe you have predicted well, soon we'll see Anna try something a little meaner to get her point across
[Report This]Date: July 31 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 15: Close to the Chest
Hope it does not end soon. Personally would like more feet. Would also like to see Stockholm syndrome take effect and they become almost if not willing to please. Just an opinon :P Good stuff so far. Great writing. More patience than I have.
Date: July 30 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Close to the Chest
They need to step on one of them soon! :P Nice story!
Date: July 22 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Family reunion is an excellent story so far.I am about half way through and it is really well done.
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response: thanks very much, glad you like it
[Report This]Date: July 20 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sole Mates
Great chapter as usual. I see you started a new story too. I have a question if I may ask it. Will you be continuing the "Blackmail series? All your stuff is great. But those are my favorite of your stories, I just love how evil the sister is. I wondering where it can go to from where it left off.
Dave
Author's Response:
i will indeed. my fear was that starting the 3rd one so soon would make it become stale, but i will eventually go back
[Report This]Date: July 18 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sleep Tight
Dont worry about how long your story gets, It keeps getting better. I really am having a blast reading your stuff.
Dave
[Report This]Date: July 18 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sleep Tight
I like how Alison swatted Kevin out of the way like a petulant mouse. Ha, ha!
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure he had it coming :)
[Report This]Date: July 17 2011 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 12: Cheeseburger with a Side of Cousin
Oh this was such an evil chapter. I loved every second of it. Great job man.
Dave
[Report This]Date: July 17 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12: Cheeseburger with a Side of Cousin
Burger Time for Allison.
Bon Appetit!
Author's Response:
damn... nice one
[Report This]Date: July 17 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 12: Cheeseburger with a Side of Cousin
Thank you for a wonderful experience so far.
Author's Response:
glad you like it
[Report This]Date: July 15 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11: Food for Thought
Oh I just love how Anna and Alison are being so cruel. And being so cool and casual about it. I love this chapter. You are doing a fantastic job. I really love your writing style.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks man, hope you continue to enjoy
[Report This]Date: July 12 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 10: Field Trip
Wow that was a close one. I'm glad the cop let them go. A very exciting chapter. Great as usual.
Dave
Author's Response:
I figured it was about time to throw a threat at this story's ant-heroes
[Report This]Date: July 10 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 9: Dress for Success
No they don't annoy me at all. The longer the better. MORE STORY MORE STORY MORE STORY YAAAAAY.....LOL
Author's Response: Haha ok. I thought I should ask since if I'm in a hurry, I tend to prefer shorter chapters on stories
[Report This]Date: July 09 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Wine and Shoe Tasting
I had to make the couch a sued leather as a white flip flop on a white couch would have been too much white on white.
But here poor Helen is, licking away at her chores.
Author's Response: That is one dirty looking shoe
[Report This]Date: July 08 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 8: Sock Party
Here we have the poor girl transferred to the more smelly part of the foot just for good measure!
Author's Response:
again, excellent
Date: July 08 2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sock Party
Here's a pic for this wonderfully narrated scene.
Keep up the great work!
And boy oh boy when will the girl ever learn to shut that stupid mouth of hers?!
Author's Response:
looks great! love the details
[Report This]Date: July 08 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sock Party
Loved the sock scene. I loved the whole chapter really. I hope Alison does some butt torture as well as the foot torture stuff. I don't know why but butt torture stuff in these kinds of stories is one of my favorite things.
Dave
[Report This]Date: July 06 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: Wine and Shoe Tasting
More foot action please
Author's Response: next chapter, we get to the foot stuff
[Report This]Date: July 05 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7: Wine and Shoe Tasting
Great chapter as usual. I really love the humiliation Anna is putting her in laws through. A very fun and well thought out chapter.
Dave