[Report This]Date: November 25 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 9: Dress for Success
Lenght is just great. We can read without having to wait for the next page to load. Again a great story, thanks mate t
Date: October 12 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 20: Family Values
Love this story particularly. Hope you keep writing and hope you visit this story again soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review. I will eventually return to these characters.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Cooool stories!!!!!
[Report This]Date: August 19 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 12: Cheeseburger with a Side of Cousin
Wow...this chapter absolutely revolutionized my approach to non-voyeuristic vore. I was able to enjoy this chapter as much as many of the micro stories that I typically enjoy, even without the vore.
I sent you an email, just in case you missed it. :)
Author's Response:
very glad you enjoyed it. i did not however get any new emails; i'm not sure, i think the email sending from this site is a little flaky or something
Date: August 15 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Well done great story from the start.
Please write another in a similar way, it was such a good read your best storie to date.
i look forward to your next story, soon i hope ? my mark is 10 out of 10.
Author's Response:
it will be soon, i've had a lot of fun writing all these
[Report This]Date: August 15 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 20: Family Values
That was a great chapter. A great way to end it. I never expected Anna to kill both Kevin and Helen. But hey they deserved it. And now Alison has a couple of new pets. Will there be a story in the future about how she treat them? I hope so. You did a great job on this story. I loved every chapter.
Dave
Author's Response:
i'm not sure if there will be a sequel; i've heard quite a bit more about a possible return for the blackmail characters over these characters, but it might be fun to try if people seemed to be for it
Date: August 14 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I'm not sure what to say here as this was quite the shocker ending but not surprising given the antics of the captors in the previous chaptors. My only wish would be Alison getting to spend some time in Ashley's place with a certain evil sister lol.
I know Ashley was a bitch in her old life but I found myself feeling most sorry for her and Tony throughout all of this since they were lost in the sins of the parents.
Great stuff you are definitely one of my new favorite writers these days.
Author's Response:
A Little Blackmail and Family Reunion: The Crossover! haha, just kidding. i'm glad you felt bad for Ashley, the intention was definitely to blur the good/bad lines between the camps of characters
[Report This]Date: August 14 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
This is one of your best stories yet, I think. I love the variety of interactions you came up with, and how your characters started out sympathetic and reasonable. The scene where mother and daughter reunite after separately abusing their captives was fantastic.
Your last two endings aren't making me feel optimistic about the fate of Jack, though. :)
Author's Response:
i'm glad you thought they were sympathetic, that's always my goal. and jack's definitely in for a wild ride whenever he and carly make their triumphant return
[Report This]Date: August 14 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Way to end things in style, yet again! I know I sound like a broken record, but you do a marvelous job of setting up scenes of awesome female supremacy in all of your stories. You have a great nack for gts stuff, so please keep the creative juices flowing. That foot crush scene was epic!
Author's Response:
glad you liked it, i thought it was finally time to try out a gory crush
Date: August 14 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 20: Family Values
Well i must say a great storie all thro well done your work is exceptional, i hope you write further stories in a similar way.
Thank you for the read.
Author's Response:
sure thing :)
Date: August 12 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
That was a good twist with the crash, a very good story from the start, I love the family connection I think that makes it all the more intriguing, I would love to see a second follow up to this its just so gripping.
I would have liked to seen some more interaction between Anna and Tony but this is your story and you’ve done a great job, very well done.
I don’t know how you intend to finish this but I would love to see it with all the characters still alive, perhaps Kevin being tortured by Anna and Alison, on a daily basis for his crime.
I look forward to more stories from you, and thank you for a great read.
Author's Response:
glad you like it. i do have the ending planned out, and it's a bit different than what you've suggested, but i hope you enjoy it regardless. i hadn't considered a second one, but i guess if there was enough interest i might do one at some point
[Report This]Date: August 11 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 19: Tinkering with Tony
holy cow. i did not expect that twist of kevin setting up the car accident. well done!
Date: August 10 2011 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
whoa what a cliffhanger =D
[Report This]Date: August 09 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Little Leverage
Wow that was an Awesome chapter, And the ending was Incredible, I have to tell you I was surprised. I thought you would break one arm or a leg. But wow both arms and both legs. I wasn't expecting that. This was by far the most intense chapter and my favorite chapter. Fantastic story telling, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you liked. on your other question about butt action, i'm thinking this story isn't going to go there, but you'll definitely see some in the 3rd blackmail story
[Report This]Date: August 09 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 17: Toe-Tied
cant wait to see what anna is doing..
aaron
[Report This]Date: August 08 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 17: Toe-Tied
This was a fantastic chapter. I love Alison getting to get even with her aunt and uncle. The feet stuff is really good, But I was hoping maybe we have her or her mother subjecting Helen or Kevin to a little butt action.
Dave
Date: August 07 2011 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 17: Toe-Tied
im more of a gentle giant kind of person but still this story is pretty good.
Author's Response:
i appreciate you giving this a shot even though it's not your favorite thing
Date: August 07 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I didn't think you could top Carly in terms of viciousness but Alison is coming awfully close. Excellent stuff.
Author's Response:
hehe thanks; Carly's going to give Alison a run for her money now in the 3rd blackmail story ;)
[Report This]Date: August 05 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wake Up Call
Awesome chapter as always. I cant wait to see what happens next. I am loving this story. I love it when people get what they deserve in stories. It so rarely happens in the real world.
Dave
Date: July 31 2011 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Am really loving this story, I would love to see one of them swallowed whole, perhaps when the girls dont get what they want.
Or maybe Allison pleasures herself with Ashley's Boyfriend infront of her. Or maybe even use her underwear to carry them around.
Author's Response:
i'm not much for insertion, so i hope you won't be disappointed there, but there may be more mouthplay later