Date: January 23 2012 8:53 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Please add a new chapter can't wait any longer might just die
Author's Response: Updated! Still alive?
Date: December 23 2011 8:56 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Grrrr I love this serous update please!
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long!
Date: November 20 2011 9:25 PM Title: In Remembrance
I also wonder when might this next chapter arrive and what kind Of unaware adventure lays ahead of them
Author's Response: This newest chapter contains more voyeur, as will the next several chapters. I hope you enjoy it.
Date: November 13 2011 6:38 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Yes yes and yes I had thought you gave up but you didn't. Your an amazing writer and please keep it up.
Author's Response: Lol I don't know about amazing...but thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2011 10:53 PM Title: In Remembrance
OH MY GOD I LOVE POCKETS! But really, so happy to see you continue this story, it has grown to be one of my favorites (and by that I mean, of all time on this site). I like that you are constantly shifting the story around so that it doesn't become stilted or make you lose that creative spark. Writing is still top notch. Hopefully it won't be so long before another addition...no pressure or anything heh.
Author's Response: :( sorry to disappoint with the space between updates, but I'm honored to hear you enjoying the story. I have plans for the story to take a dramatic turn in direction. It's going to be very interesting!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2011 12:45 PM Title: Unintended Consequences
A very good chapter. The methodical and deliberate torment that Tiffany is issuing her younger step-sibblings is incredible. I didn't think that Tiffany was actually going to go through with it, so I applaud your refusal to back down from writing a hard-hitting and tragic story.
Author's Response: It was the hardest thing Ive done to a well developed character. I've got big plans, stay tuned!
Date: November 12 2011 10:48 AM Title: Sanity Questions
So far I have really enjoyed this story. It is very well-done.
In response to your comments preceding the chapter, you are right, no decent human being would do such a thing. There are plenty of decent human beings in the world who would do the right thing. Sadly enough, there are plenty who would not. I think it is a reality of the human condition. Unfortunately there are those who seek to profit, gain, or simply derive pleasure from the suffering of those around them. I could elaborate but it is too philosophical a discussion for a review.
Meanwhile the story continues to draw me in. One thing I noticed though is that you have referred to Tiffany's blonde hair a couple times but at one point you say that "the brunette sat on the couch..." An easy fix.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments, this is a pretty deepe subject, I agree, maybe not something for a review...lol. Glad you enjoy the story, your comments are always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2011 12:29 AM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Absolutely fantastic. Second review I've ever done and second review for this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I had no idea what I was going to do with the story for a while, I thought I'd written myself into a wall, but now I know whats going on again...thanks for being patient!
Date: September 09 2011 4:59 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Loved the vore part! Come on Chapter 10! Digest hiiiiiim!
Author's Response:
Lol, glad to see you're enjoying the story. I'm not sure whats gonna happen, but I figured I'd focus this next chapter (chapter 10) on plot. We'll get back to Danny eventually though. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 05 2011 7:32 PM Title: A New Perspective
Update please I love this story
Author's Response:
Updated! Sorry it took a while.
Date: August 23 2011 5:48 PM Title: A New Perspective
Awsome as always keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll do my best to continue providing quality content. :)
[Report This]Date: August 22 2011 8:23 AM Title: Unintended Consequences
Amazing. The best chapter yet, and that's saying something. You keep writing 5 star additions, and I'll keep giving em out. Keep em coming!
Author's Response:
Best chapter yet, huh? Thanks again!
Date: August 22 2011 6:29 AM Title: Unintended Consequences
Amazing u should do alot more!
Author's Response:
I don't foresee and ending to this story soon, so enjoy the longevity. :)
Date: July 07 2011 8:51 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Quite possibly my favorite story so far this year. I'm a big unaware fan and most people aren't able to create the sort of drama and tension that makes unaware so engaging. I'm also digging the pseudo-unaware aspects where the giantess isn't so sure if the tiny kids are real. Looking forward to the continuation of this adventure :)
Author's Response:
There is definitely a fine line I am toeing to keep both the aspect of drama and adventure, as well as the light-hearted, fun aspect in good balance, but you'll notice, if you read the most recent chapter "Unintended Consequences" one of the two had to win the battle. Thank you for your review, and kind words! Being the author of a story in the running for anyones favorite of the year is certainly something I appreciate, and thank you for mentioning it!
Date: July 03 2011 6:50 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
Loving this story. Please continue it is geting really good. :) Read mine as well and tell me what you think. I have a couple i am working on as well.
Author's Response:
Sorry I have not had time to read your stories! I will though, and will give you a review as soon as possible. In the mean time, thanks for your positive words, and please continue reading my other stories! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 3:31 AM Title: Internal Struggles
Outstanding
[Report This]Date: July 01 2011 4:20 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
This story was so enthralling that I have decided to give my first review. Absolutely great stuff here man. Being a micro/foot fetishist, this is sublime. Although, I am also a fan of in-shoe ^_^.
I like unaware interactions the most, but am warming up to the aware interactions given your interesting take on Tiffany's mentality.
Keep it up. I just hope to see more of Joanna.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Joanna IS coming back. We've spent a lot of time with Tiffany, but Tiffany it is necessary to get the mood of the story where I need it to re-introduce Joanna. Thanks so much for honoring me with your first review, I'll be sure to try to include more in-shoe situations in my writing, because it's a favorite of mine, as well.
Date: July 01 2011 8:24 AM Title: Sanity Questions
Really like where this is heading. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 9:49 PM Title: Sanity Questions
I agree with your soap boxing. This is a great way to keep realism into the story (well, as real as it can be anyway). Going from here, anything is possible.
Date: June 30 2011 7:49 PM Title: Snug As A Bug...
You've got so many writings leaving me in suspense at once solidifying your place here as a future favorite of mine. Your characterization, especially of Tiffany, and descriptions are fun and fantastic.
All I can say is keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hey, that's great! A little healthy anticipation of the next chapter is always good, and the fact that I can recreate that for you makes me feel pretty good. Thanks a lot, your words are appreciated more than you know.