[Report This]Date: March 04 2023 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consultation
Great erotic story. Well described and with a great tense build-up. Would have been great if it ended with chapter 3 (for the vore fetishists), but chapter 4 was great from the other perspective. It would have been interesting to see what she would have done if Carl had simply given up and not fought to survive. Would she have gone through with digesting him? I think, probably so.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Result
This was the most unique and interesting vore story I've read in a long time! I loved the way you used it here! Good message! This was also very well-written in general; sharp in it's realism and very sensual in language and presentation. A very refreshing read!
Author's Response:
It's always a fun surprise getting reviews on old stories. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed the read!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: Result
Very nice story and plot. An interesting story and quiet refreshing. You explained your ideas well and put them on paper perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. It's always fun to know people are still reading my older stories.
Date: December 02 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consultation
That's what I like; a vore story with a little conscience and a fresh perspective on what amounts to a really weird fantasy.
Did you know that everyone has a primal leaning towards vore but it just hasn't been
triggered in very many of us. You can prove it but I don't recommend trying.
Very well done on the story.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consultation
I'm likely your work more and more, especially the "A Little Blackmail" series. Especially recently.
This was very different from that in terms of the "giantess" character, and I think it was really terrific! I applaud your decision to flesh it out and give it a last chapter. I think that makes the doctor, and the plot, much more interesting, and makes the story a true pleasure to read. I'll admit, I'm a bit inspired, and that's not generally what I go to this site for.
You have my thanks.
Date: September 17 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Consultation
Outstanding story. A pleasure to read, very descriptive, and a satisfying finish. I enjoyed reading it, and will work my way through your others as well.
thanks for the review, i hope you like anything else you read also
Author's Response:
Date: July 26 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4: Result
Quickie? I wonder what you consider a long story. I was drawn in from the beginning. The characters were convincing, and your sensory descriptions are very strong. This helps the reader "be there". If this is what you just "pop out" for fun i would love to read what you've actually put work into.
Author's Response: thanks for the comment. long, to me, is something like 100,000 words or so; this was the shortest thing I've written so far
Date: July 17 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Result
Great story man. Very well written and descriptive. I was a little dissapointed in the end result as a melevolant but beautiful doctor who swallows men alive. I was dissapointed that he was allowed to live. It would be an excellent vore story but otherwise great job.
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you enjoyed it. i considered ending it with the 3rd chapter, but decided i liked her character too much to have her be evil
[Report This]Date: June 23 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Consultation
You made vore interesting for me, something that I thought was impossible. I enjoyed this short story; it packs a hard, mean punch in only a few chapters. I think you're gifted at developing the dee sense of dread and psycholotical crumbling of your main characters, as they face, if not utter doom, the disintegration of their self-worth. Here's to hoping that Carly tires of her brother in the third installment and horrifyingly ends him!
Author's Response:
i'm glad i got you to enjoy a different kind of subgenre. and i am currently brainstorming part 3 of the "Carly trilogy"
[Report This]Date: June 23 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: Treatment
nicee :P
Date: June 22 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 3: Treatment
“Trust me, Carl, I’m a doctor.”
One of the best vore stories I've read.
Very well written.
Author's Response:
thanks; i just couldn't resist incorporating that particular phrase when it seemed to fit so eerily well with the situation
[Report This]Date: June 22 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Explanation
Once again another brilliant tale in the making, if only the world was accept ant of us, then we could produce extensive millions and make big bucks. A lot of guys here with serious talent. Just saying :p
Date: June 22 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Consultation
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. Good job so far!
Author's Response:
thanks; hope you like the ending