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Date: March 13 2018 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: WHEN WORLDS COINCIDE

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 14: DICK AND THE BEANSTALK

A great way to end the story (for real, this time)! As to your end note, however? You just have to accept the fact that not every Bat-fan can have Tim Drake...and Jason Todd, too.

X-D

Author's Response:

Yes, true. Maybe I should have put Jason Todd into Beatrix Potter's the Tale of Mr Tod .... err Mr Todd.

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Date: August 24 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 13: ADVENTURES OUTSIDE THE DC UNIVERSE

I remember that story arc! It was part of a liberal adaptation of the Homeric Odyssey, I think. Because, in the previous issue, he and several fellow shipwreck victims wound up stranded on the island of a red-headed enchantress named Sirenna. A sort of Circe/Siren amalgam who turned all the others into animal-headed pets for her hand maidens. While Korak was left intact, but magicially leashed, so that he had to obey the sound of her voice!

Author's Response:

I haven't read the previous one yet, as I was scanning covers for giantess content and picked up on the ones I used.

Well next chapter it's all one big storybook projection yarn to wrap the thing up for now.

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Date: August 22 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 12: CRISIS IN CLASSIC LITERATURE

Oops! Almost forgot to score you.

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Date: August 22 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 12: CRISIS IN CLASSIC LITERATURE

Good for Aunty Monitor. Because, that would most certainly have aroused the ire of the Critics. The latter are an offshoot of Marvel Comics' Watchers, whose self-appoined duty is to observe and complain! Of course, in reality, they were Marvel's good-natured jibe against the Controllers (purple-skinned genetic relatives of the Guardians of the Universe).

Author's Response:

Some very interesting connections there, and not sure if you were even joking about the Critics LOL..., and I've forgotten to rate people so many times (even after it was explained to me that there's a rating system, something I overlooked for a long time) that I'm embarrassed to admit it. So I wouldn't worry.

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Date: May 30 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 11: THE BUG STOPS HERE

P.S.---In belated answer to your earlier question? Yes. The Janet Van Dyne of Ultimate Marvel Earth was known as Giant Woman. In fact, she was partnered with Spidey in what was basically an Ultimate version of the Avengers Initiative!* Something that was temporarily pastiched over @ Giantess City, I believe.


*That was a year or two before Ultimate Parker got killed off in favor of a young Afro-Hispanic lad. :-(

Author's Response:

Ultimate Avengers eh? I must look into those. Giant Janet and Spidey. What a great idea.

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Date: May 30 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 11: THE BUG STOPS HERE

Well, I wouldn't say that my stories have "changed!" Not radically, anyway. I'm merely trying to give each one a suitable tone (steampunkiness for THE THIN LINE, for example). As for the Flash's more benign use of the Storybook Projector? I'm jealous the real me didn't think of it, first!*


*Finger snap of half-serious disappointment.

Author's Response:

No, YOUR stories haven't changed, but Girlfood thought he was writing to Carycomic, after he read the stories that Barry Allen wrote and passed off as Carycomic's word, when he took over Carycomic's life and projected Carycomic into the Golden Age of Comics using the Toyman's storybook projector. (All that, if I recall my earlier chapters correctly. I think Carycomic replaced Darrell Dane in the origin of Dollman).

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Date: June 10 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 10: CARY ME BACK TO OL' PRIME

I'm in a Timescribe story? How bizarre! I'm flattered and slightly confused. :P

You certainly have my fanboyish nitpickiness down and my love of mouthplay. I would never call your work drivel though. I hope I don't come across as a jerk in my reviews.

If I was going to be vored (is that a word?), that's probably not how I would have chosen it. But there are worse ways to go than eaten by Wonder Woman.

Speaking of nitpickiness (because ya knew it was coming), I believe Wally West's wife is named Linda, not Tina. And though Barry and Iris both died in the 80s...they got better.



Author's Response:

Actually, I was calling my work drivel as part of the comedy in the story. 

The Tina I was referring to was Tina McGee in 1987 Flash series issues 3-14 or so (the older woman relationship, and drawn gorgeously too).

I did take a bit of license, and of course the whole thing was mainly written to give Carycomic (and hopefully you) a few laughs. Nothing jerky about your reviews. I just worked the reviews of my Jan 2010 piece Justice League: Wonders Within in for more gags.

I've had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm honoured that it drew your attention, and a review. Btw you're not permanently eaten. The moment Mxyzpixislicked (and I couldn't resist that name) returns to his own dimension, you should be back to normal as the fictional replacement Ryan Choi Atom outside Wonder Woman's stomach and back in your own duplex.

I hope this is good news. LOL.

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Date: June 10 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: CARY ME BACK TO OL' PRIME

Excellent!!!

I especially liked the revamped Calorie Queen; the slight homage to Marvel's Ultimate version of Janet Pym; and your flattering theory about dimension-hopping Cary's ;-)

Author's Response:

And I even got a review from Pixis! Wow

But re the Janet Pym thing again I accomplished this by accident. I've never read of the Ultimate Version of Janet Pym. Can you tell me what comics she appeared in (and rough dates) and does this mean she ends up with growth power instead of being tiny?

And here's the big revelation. I haven't read LSH properly since 2009. I just made up Mite Eater Lass, having forgotten Calorie Queen altogether. I wish I'd had your memory, and she would have been the character I'd used, although I guess the Mite Eater Lass pun is good for comedy vore.

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Date: June 10 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 9: LEGIONNAIRES FREE

X-D

Ah, if only...!

Thanks for this highly entertaining pastiche, Tim. It really cheered me up. :-)

Author's Response:

But it's not over yet. You get a surprise twist (with an interesting connection made to someone else you might remember) in the next new additional chapter. Enjoy!

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Date: June 10 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 8: MOUTHWAR

Unless, of course, she sprays him with cancelite, so he's powerless to escape her body. ;-)

Author's Response:

Cancel-Mite! Oh dear. You really have read about Supergirl's invention in that story in Adventure Comics 226.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 7: THE TIMESCRIBE TRAPPER & THE INTIMATE FAN

I cannot wait to see how this varies from the original. ;-)

Author's Response:

You've read the 1960s Legion stories! Every time I wonder if I should bother writing my latest story idea, I'm spurred on by anticipation of how you'll react to it.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 6: ON THE TONGUE WITH WONDER WOMAN

Excellent rendition, Tim! And, I must confess: you were pretty spot-on with your psychoanalysis of me.

;-)

Author's Response:

Spot on? Bwwahahahahhahha! I was just playing the fool for comedy's sake, and now I learn that the biggest joke is I actually got it right.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 5: MILD, MEEK FAN IN WASHINGTON

One word: WHOA!

Author's Response:

Wait til you see what Pixis and Wonder Woman do in the newly posted chapter 10.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 4: A CARYCOMIC IN LEAN MARTHA'S COURTSHIP

Uh-oh! I wonder if Mr. Mind is altering multiversal realities, again? Only, this time, a lot more subtly.

Author's Response:

Actually, my friend, it's the result of my parody of your own mind.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 3: THE GREATEST STORIES EVER RETOLD

Oh, this is going to be good!

Author's Response:

Well, if the story disappears, you'll know that Pixis and Asukafan have been talking.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: WHEN WORLDS COINCIDE

Thank you for your fierce defense of my half-serious thrillers. It's a never-ending battle not to erase them out of despair (the chief symptom of George Lucas' Disease)!

Author's Response:

Now that's amusingly paradoxical. I've never FIERCEly defended something HALF-SERIOUS before.

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Date: June 10 2011 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: SYUPERFRIEND, REST IN PRIME

YES! I'm officially famous. :-D

*Does Rocky Balboa Victory Dance.*

Author's Response:

You'd have to check with a certain ex-Penguin on that score.

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