[Report This]Date: July 20 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
This, in spite of its seemingly permanent status as unfinished, is my favorite "giantess in the city" story ever and perhaps even my favorite in general. If by some miracle this is continued someday, that would be positively awesome.
Author's Response:
Many thanks! My life has just been pretty full, and i lost my muse and wasn't/am not really sure where the story is going or what else to make happen. As such, i don't want to get your hopes up too much, but I reread this the other day and have given thought to resusscitating it. I work on snippets occasionally. So no promises but keep your eyes peeled! And thanks again for the compliment.
Your pal and mine,
Me
Date: February 16 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
Hey, this is Shameless, decided to register with my GC name. Just thought you should know that my re-write of your story is sadly on permanent hiatus.
But never fear! I'll still be ripping you off in a different re-write I'm working on as I adapt entire chunks of the Rippling Wall re-write I was doing to it. Hooray for plagiarism!
Your story is still pretty much the best around and nothing's gonna ever keep it down.
Author's Response:
I saw that. well you've ensured credit goes wherest credit is due and I like covers and reimaginings as much as the next feller. Now that i see your true face however I must express my regret that you never finished that godesszilla remix some years back. for shame! I still have it saved on the ol' porn mach..i mean data processing computer here. And thank you for the inspirational 80's reference, maybe some day the story will come back, sweeped leg or not, for an awe-inspiring crane kick of well-written ideas and texts.
Date: July 12 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 CANNONBALL!
Your standard of writing is good, and I did enjoy this chapter, though you should remember to put speech on separate lines to the description.
Date: July 12 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's nice to see this story back. Not much else to say except this chapter feels shorter than usual.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
Two questions: 1) Are you going to continue? 2) What the hell kind of a name is Pan?
Author's Response:
1) yes and 2) a weird one, the likes of which have nevvvver been heard of before! :)
[Report This]Date: February 22 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
This story is pretty much everything I like to see in GTS literature. The attitude of the girl is perfect, the interactions are interesting, and your poetic imagery really puts this over the top.
I hope you don't mind, but I've started editing/writing over this story, and with your permission I'd like to start posting it here. I've changed some details and have done some pretty heavy editing, but large sections are still your story. I would, of course, be sure to point to you and this story as the source.
Author's Response:
Hey, glad you like it. Thanks for the kind compliments. You have my express permission to post your edited version. I have absolutely no doubt this is in need of some heavy editing, i often thought so, even as I was typing, but didn't really have anyone to bounce it off of; and it is always healthy to get someone else's spin on things. Sorry I'm just now telling you this. I'm a month late! But yeah full steam ahead I say, as long as you point to me. :) And I demand atleast 60% of the profits from any and all merchandising, including but not limited to coffee mugs,t-shirts, mouseapads and chainsaws... :)
Date: September 01 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
The story seems never ending. I wonder what's happening the otherside of the portal.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
NO NOT THE DOG! seriousaly i just read 11 chapters in one sitting great story she turned bloodthirsty rather quickly didnt she. top marks for not going over the top on the feet. :)
[Report This]Date: August 29 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm sorry, but I'm still confused. The reporter called it America... so... could you please fill in the blanks for me? It's just really hard to wrap my head around.
Author's Response:
Good call. When I started this story I intended to make it a completely foreign/alien land/world on which she was trodding in, but this slipped by me. I'll probably edit it later, in the meantime, assume he meant "Hello, nation." :)
Date: July 25 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 BEER IS GOOD!*
I actually don't like the taste of beer. Glad the dirty man got killed though.
Author's Response:
That's probably fortunate. Beer is bad for you. And yes, poor Oscar...
Date: July 20 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 9 Excercise and a LIGHT diet. ;)
haha the sun thing was cool, plz make her big enough to actully do that plz?
Author's Response:
as ypu can tell, in my latest chapter, I AM planning on making her grow. Though whether or not she'll go "giga" or not, and especially whether she'll actually consume the sun (essentially replaying the scene I already wrote) I haven't decided...
Date: July 19 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 9 Excercise and a LIGHT diet. ;)
Ok, this story is getting wierd but I still think your a good author. So why is some of the chapter in italics?
Author's Response:
the parts in italics aren't really happening, she's just imagining them. and Sorry for the weirdness. :)
Date: July 10 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great! When will the next chapter be?
Author's Response:
today. :)
Date: July 10 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 2; The start of "the good stuff"
So here in chapter 2 epscially, I think it would best if you put speech on separate lines to the description. I just makes your story easier to read.
Date: July 10 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 Pan the Ant-eater
I'm very impressed, although you need to work on your paragrpahing more. Some of them are very long, espcially in the first couple chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
Your story is aweomse, and just the sort of insperation I needed to get writing again! Reminds me of those old pumha videos somewhat. I have been meaning to write a story like this for a while but I'll need to finish any unfinished stories first.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you like it, and I'm happy it has inspired you to pick up the pen (and/or computer) again. We need more authors, and I'm glad you're on the case. I hope you continue to enjoy this as I sporadically continue.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
Exactly how many inches tall are these tiny people?
Author's Response:
Ah, I thought a query like this might come up soon. :) I absolutely suck at measurements and am fairly bad at spatial relations, so if this is inconsistent in anyway I apologize, but i would say the people are less than an inch tall to her. Approx. :) And again that's bound to fluctuate do to my inability to accurately comprehend dimensions...I mean because of the ever-changing and random nature of the portal through which she stepped... :D Anyway thanks for the review, and I hope you keep enjoying!
Date: July 05 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 7 Pans hands
does blood rly taste sweet? lol jk i like ur story a lot, ur descriptions r cool
Author's Response:
No, to the average person, it definitely does not. :) Very salty and eventually nauseating actually. But, the way I'm justifying it is that some essence of the portal, whatever it's origin is Alien, Magic or Super-Science, "seeped" (lack of a better word) into her body and changed the way it reacts to the world, mostly to ensure the would-be portal-jumper's survival. And this essence has changed the way her tastebuds translate the chemicals in blood, the blood hasn't chnged but her perception of it's flavor. This residual "portal-essence" is also what protects her from the cop's bullets and contributes ever slightly to her cruel apathy towards the bug-sized humans she tortures. Why? Because. That's why. :) In other words, I brought the essence into the story so i could make the giantess do more things I wanted her to. :) Anyhoo, I hope you continue to enjoy my story, and thank you for complimenting my descriptions.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 Building Buffet
I like this chapter and the next one
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad I could be of service.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2011 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
I love this, you can't possibly say you have not got skill as for a first shot this is pure genius, thanks for posting it and much luck in the future :p
Author's Response:
ok, i need to clarify this is technically my second and a half shot. I started an introduction, called 'the egg" on giantess city a few years ago, but a guy thought I was being satanic? in my story and i let the story die like so many others in this community, and have a shrunken adventure/ pulp science fiction story on writing.com, jake mcdash and the journey to garganticus 5. mostly dead. But this is my first real go at a story,with more than an intro. Anyhoo, thanks for the positive feedback and encouragement and I hope you still like it even though its only sort-of my first go. :)