[Report This]Date: May 15 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
This was a great chapter. I cant wait to see what happens. You are a very good writer.
Dave
[Report This]Date: May 14 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
chapter was superb. great details an descriptions. awaiting next chapter.
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 14 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story, I'm loving it. Are you planning any ass worship? That's my kink, I would love to be made to do that at Eric's size.
David
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
That category was mistakenly put in there by me when I set up the story (was getting used to the site controls). Someone else had mentioned this also, so I am working a little bit of that into the story. Seeing how popular it is, I will probably end up writing another story completely devoted to ass worship in the future.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far! Can I request to have a bit of sock and nylon action thrown in at some point? Thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story. Currently im on chapter 5 and im loving the direction this story is taking. My only criticism is how vanessa is referred to as "mom" and how he thinks of her as his mom. It may only be me but incest flashes through my mind whenever it says mom. Other than that, excellent story and I like forward to more additions.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great ratings, nexela!
Nope, that is exactly what I want you to be thinking. I have them refer to each other that way so that the reader will think of them as being mother and son, all the while telling them early in the story that they aren't related. Kind of like when a girl will call her man "Daddy". I just find the incest theme gives my story a little more emotion.
And the next chapters are on their way, time's just becoming a scarcity for me currently.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
now were off to the lab.. but until then vanessa has to get by the checkpoints with her precious cargo. cant wait to see what happens next. an i wonder if they will make more of the shrink liquid?
aaron
ps an wonder if vanessa will shrink sandy?
[Report This]Date: May 11 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
cant wait to see what you have in store. awesome sex scene. beautifully written.
aaron
Date: May 11 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
You could tell by the end of chapter 1 that this was going to be a great story. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
this story just keeps getting better. im amazed, well done. wonder what will happen when sandy comes over?
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 10 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice story indeed perfect build up and what can i say keep up the good work....
[Report This]Date: May 10 2011 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
You're an excellent writer and continouly produce tantalizing scenes of mother/son naughtiness. I like how she simply dominates him with her maternal body and power. Personally, I'd love to see her gently place him between her toes and slowly pump him dry. Also, do you plan to have her turn a bit "evil," or be gentle the whole way? Thanks for such a great story; you can tell you've taken your time!
Author's Response:
I have thought about turning her evil, and I tried it for a while, but I abandoned that. It turned out not to be as believable as I would have liked. So I will probably save that idea for another story.
Rest assured though, there are some parts coming up that I'm working on now that I think you will enjoy.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
very erotic and awesome. well done. cant wait to see if he shrinks to like 2in. or whatever.. great pace to this tale.
aaron
Author's Response:
@aaron
Thank you for the comments. I like all the feedback I can get.
You're close enough :). Chapter 4 is almost done, should be up by tomorrow sometime.
Date: May 09 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is great! Hope you think about updating it regularly, because its one of those few stories that actually have well-developed characters and a plot! Keep at it I'll be checking constantly!
Date: May 09 2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
@aaron
Thx for the review. And yeah they were bare, I see I didn't mention it. Glad you caught it though. Won't happen again haha.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2011 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh thats why shes mom.. great start. very realistic, and the characters are remarkable. love the relastionship the the mother son have. an the building up for the next chapter was superb.
well done.
aaron
ps when eric was rubbing vanessa's feet were they bare or with stockings?
[Report This]Date: May 09 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
really nice chapter.
thought it was about his stepmom though?
well now its on to the next chapter.
aaron
Date: May 09 2011 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Livenindeath, your comment kinda put the last piece of the puzzle in for me. I hadn't found a model yet to base Vanessa off of, which is why I haven't put as much descriptive info in for her, but I think C.H. fits the bill perfectly.
Date: May 09 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, well written, I love the premise. Keep going with this gem if you please. P.S. I had christina hendricks in my head during this whole story with her ample chest.