Date: May 03 2023 5:15 PM Title: Epilogue
A nice, lewd, wholesome story. I'm always a fan of milfs, especially gentle yet lewd ones. The epilogue wraps it up nicely enough that this could be the end of it but also leaves it open enough that you could make a new story in this setting. It baffles me that I went this long without finding this story. Good work!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2016 11:11 AM Title: Epilogue
This is one of my favourite stories on this website and I have read it over and over again. Loved the dynamic between Eric and Vanessa and the payoff.
Date: February 02 2016 12:26 PM Title: Epilogue
This is my favorite stoey can you continue it please. You already had good ideas in the epilogue.
Date: July 31 2014 1:36 AM Title: Epilogue
Simply, Amazing story!
Date: September 03 2012 6:50 PM Title: Epilogue
i think there should be an adition to the story a sequil if you will or you could make it in to a series that has Eric at variuos sizes and what she does with him then like for an example she has him at a baby size and she makes him suck on her brest for milk
Date: August 11 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
DO YOU KNOW LONG IT TOOK ME TO FIND A STORY THIS AMAZING!?
[Report This]Date: May 27 2011 11:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Ack, completely forgot to rate the story. And this website forces you to leave a comment before you can. Soooo I'll just take the opportunity to pipe in, the shower scene towards the end was the stuff of dreams! Ahem but yeah, that's all. :)
Date: May 27 2011 11:33 AM Title: Epilogue
You know, I've read a great many giantess themed stories over the years. Heck more than I'd care to tell... But stories of this caliber are truely a rare thing. And dispite there being little to no mention of size play in the first two chapters I was hooked right from the start. Because unlike alot of authors. You took the time to lay a foundation for the relationship between your characters. And slowly build from that, in a way that made it very easy to believe everything that happened.
Which in turn made the road to self discovery between Eric and Vanessa that much more enjoyable.. Every chapter it seemed, was and adventure in itself. And always ended on a note that left me dying to see more. *Chuckles* Which admitedly kind of goes for the ending of the story too. But then, after having read the extra chapter, I've come to realize that there simply wasn't a way to end this story. Because like alot of people, I'm sure, I would have loved to have seen their whole lives played out. :) But in the end, I was very happy with the way the two came to utterly depend on one another. Even if Vanessa's secret was a little out of character for her. :)
Having said that, I'll be the first to admit that I absolutely loved the more intimate aspects of the story. Starting with the foot play. Which has always been one of my bigger kinks. And I'll be damned if you didn't do an amazing job at describing everything from both characters perspectives. Including things like the smells and sweating and such. Which many authors seem to just completely forget about. And then of course the brief encounter with Sandy. Reaalllly would have loved to have seen her go a little furether with things. Or maybe for Eric and Vanessa to explore some anal play. But then, I guess it just didn't really fit the characters. :)
And lastely, as far as suggestions for future stories. Hmmm well, I'd love to see you tackle something in the way of love story.. Like say, a shy, bookish gal has fallen for a popular guy at school. But is far to shy to make her feelings known. And in an act of desperation shrinks him down and whisks him away, in hopes of making herself heard. Just one of those ideas I've always wanted to see put to paper. ^.^
[Report This]Date: May 25 2011 7:09 PM Title: Epilogue
This epilogue chapter does the story a bit more justice, and ends the story well. I'll be looking out for anything new you create in the future.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
A solid end to a great story, even if it was a bit rushed. It definitely left the readers wanting more. I'm looking forward to other projects you might be working on in the future!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the five stars, even though I believe it didn't deserve it. I was unhappy with how it ended myself, so I'm writing an extended chapter. This story isn't done just yet.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
excellent story. loved it from beginning to end. wonder how long before the dad shows up though, an what will sandy do now?
but im really looking forward to your next tale even if it has nothing to do with this one.
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 19 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
please keep going... i'm dieing here.. hehe
[Report This]Date: May 19 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I loved this chapter. Eric being at Sandy' s mercy was fantastic. I loved how she tortured him with her ass. More of that if you can please.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love where the story is going. Just keep up doing what you are doing! I like that you are mixing it up and going after different things (especially where I think you are about to go with it); though, I would like to see feet come back into the mix at some point. Just a personal preference. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: May 18 2011 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
holy shit.. an wow that was an amazing plot twist.i love the direction youre headed with this. an now i want vanessa to shrink sandy even more, lol.
glad that you updated this, thankyou.
aaron
Date: May 18 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is the single greatest chapter of any story I've ever read! I love that she is starting to enjoy how he feels under her foot and I hope she convinces him that he will have to go back under her foot to sneak back out of the building onlt to realize that she is in no hurry to take him out and maybe instead of rushing home she could go out for a night on the town with her friend, and maybe while they are in her friend's lab he tells her that she knocked him out under her feet and she tells him to kiss her feet so she will know that he is awake and doing alright, and maybe if he stops kissing she presses her foot down on him until he starts again. just a thought.
I'm realy loving this story so far and I'm sure whatever you have planned will be great.
eagerly awaiting the next chapter, Eddy Cobb.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it.
And your ideas are really really good, but the way that I write, when I post a chapter, the next chapter is already finished, I just don't upload it till i'm finished the one after that. It really helps me out, cause I change so much stuff around in my chapters before I finalize them. But I will keep your idea, I might be able to work that into another story, after I take a break from this one.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
We're starting to see the buildup of a conflict, which makes this really interesting! You've got good thorough physical despcrition and creative situations. Make use of that 3rd person to really let us get into the minds of your characters, that helps build tension!
You're doing great, and there are a lot of requests for things. Personally, I'd just really like to read what you yourself are thinking of. Also, the regular updates are great.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the excellent reviews.
I am glad you're enjoying the story so far. I've read "A Chance with a Cougar" countless times, and enjoyed it immensely, and it influenced the work I did in this story. I do plan on putting my thoughts on the story in the final chapter, so stay tuned for that. Time was a scarcity over the weekend, but I count on spending a little more time this week finishing up the rest of the story.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like your style of writing, and this is a very good first story! It's nice that your sentences are grammatically correct and free of spelling errors.
As a pointer, you do want to have these opening chapters provide motivation and characterization for your upcoming climax. It sets the stage, so to speak. They might be a little more boring to write, but the readers truly appreciate it, trust me!
Keep up the good work!