Reviews For DESPATCH A THIEF
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well it was ok, but I didn't think it was all that believable. I wanted to knoew how did the guy got there and you didn't describe what the giantess looked like. Plus, if she wanted to be his friend why would she still eat him? They got on well together and yet it ends so suddenly.



Author's Response:

I guess the incongruities you rightly pointed out were part of what appealed to me and made this yarn a bit different.

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