[Report This]Date: August 10 2011 1:38 PM Title: Five: Belligerent Beauty
getting better an better. thanks for the very quick update.
aaron
Date: August 10 2011 8:02 AM Title: One: Upon Awakening
Hey this story is awesome, I like the plot and the descriptions a lot. I really look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: August 08 2011 12:19 AM Title: One: Upon Awakening
Awesome start, great writing style! I'm excited to read more!
Author's Response:
THanks for reading! =D
[Report This]Date: August 07 2011 3:14 PM Title: Four: Why, oh why...
remarkable detail. an the story is beautifully written.
aaron
ps glad to see this story back.
Author's Response:
thanks, glad to be back!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2011 9:39 AM Title: Three: First Signs of Absence
oh shit did rachel shrink joe, while she was shit faced drunk? lol. this story is turning out better than i had thought. i love the humor.
aaron
ps where is joe?
Author's Response:
Where is joe? Good question =P
Date: April 25 2011 12:53 PM Title: Two: Close Encounters Bring Realization
great start
[Report This]Date: April 23 2011 5:10 PM Title: Two: Close Encounters Bring Realization
wow.. this story is very promising. the dialog is great, as well as the concept of the story. well done. i cannot wait for more. an the descriptions an attention to detail are finominal.
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy it so far!
[Report This]Date: April 21 2011 8:06 PM Title: One: Upon Awakening
your off to a good start with good discripive elements. but i connot give you an acurate rating yet simply because of the amount of text.
Author's Response:
thank you for taking the time to read and review. There will be plenty more chapters to come (hopefully)!