good to see more of ur writing. its always a pleasure to read

really love your stories. not enough writers venture into such depths. I was wondering if maybe you could do one involving diapers?

First of all, I should apologise for not reviewing sooner. I've a few things to say, but first and foremost, thank you. I've really enjoyed reading your stories, I find them to be pure fetish stories in which you get what you want. I'm not the type of reader that sits for 5 chapters to get to know a character and then a further 3 for size changing. I like that it happens and you don't dwell on the intricacies.

The thing is though, that since you're writing one particular genre type. Booty/Butt, it can become difficult to reinvent a situation. You're solely trying to do it with different characters and scenarios. However, if you were to change up the personas of the characters, you'd have a lot more to work with and your readers would probably like to see more. A typical example. If you allowed the guy to live, or to be trapped permanently, leaving the story with an open end, the reader will see a break in your typical writing mould. Again, if the giantess was aware of the situation, it would cater to a giant audience. Many readers enjoy the giantess being dominant, so you'd have more people reading I would imagine.

You have the same general outline which can at times make the story boring. We know that any future chapter you have will have a guy, that is instantly shrunk without any explanation. He'll be apprehended by a giant girl who will unknowingly have him climb her trousers/underwear/butt, only to find himself falling back into her crack in the same manner as all the others. Then he'll be apprehended by the anus, fall in love with it, be farted on, be horrified at his situation, then succumb to her ass.

Oh, and ass gunk, when you write words like that, it feels as though you're trying to be polite. Sometimes saying the crude words like Shit, make the story work.

That's my review for your stories. I appreciate that you write for yourself, but with your talent, you can do better.

Thornton.

Sorry that last review was somone else on my computer. True these stories aren't my thing. But I'm not as blunt as that last review was

Thanks for these stories, BootyPatrol!  I love butt stories so have thoroughly enjoyed your selection!

The stories are a little too short for me. To me they are over before I really have a chance to get in to them.

Too much and too little at the same time. You have a multiple of short stories, but all of them are too short. What makes a story great is the vivid and lifelike details that makes the reader feel like they were actually living the story. You've got good ideas, but they fall flat because right after you get started, it ends and it's on to the next one. Develop the characters more and expand on their situations.

Also, the rewind thing was cool at first, but now it's become repetitive and boring. Save the alternate endings for interactive stories. For short stories choose the one ending you think is best and go with it. Death is repetitive too. Death at the end of all your stories isn't a bad thing, but if you format your stories where every chapter is a new story and they all end in death, then it's not surprising when you read the next chapter and the character dies

Not happy with it. The best snuff stories are ones where the person doing the snuff is aware that they are doing it. Accidental snuff where two people donnt both know wats going on are not a turnon.