[Report This]Date: September 15 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 - David's (final) Experience
Too bad he wasn't smart enough to try and squeeze into her small intestines, lol
Date: September 17 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Roberts Experience
Wow
[Report This]Date: September 29 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Great Story! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
I cant believe i never read this story before its Amazing! i really like the separate chapters designed for each POV and the chapters with Lucy are my favorite.
You should continue this story because the intro is already set up and theres unlimited potential for new girls and guys
[Report This]Date: July 02 2006 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction
there was suppose to be vory in it but where is it
[Report This]Date: June 26 2006 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 6 - David's Experience
Very good. Please add the carrying out of David's death sentence.
Author's Response: I'm working on it Peter! Cheers!
Date: June 25 2006 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Roberts Experience
A very good story BigAl and well written. It would make me want to cimmit a crime if I lived in such a society. Do they also use very mature plump women for the worst crimes? Heh heh.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Stanley! I'm sure there could be some 'mature plump women' somewhere on the list of volunteers!!
[Report This]Date: June 25 2006 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Roberts Experience
hey, nice story, good plot and the double point of view is really effective! Thanks a lot!
Author's Response: Thanks Nostromo! Much appreciated! As I said in the intro, I'm not a particularly creative writer, but I've certainly been given a few ideas of what works from the excellent stories on this site!
[Report This]Date: June 25 2006 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Presidents Plan.
great story ..BigAl,
I love this
"One thing had never occurred to the president when setting the punishments, and that was that a small minority of the population would actively commit petty crimes so that they could spend some time attached to someones underwear or socks! The president simply couldn’t understand this strange mentality, but he had to try and stamp it out"
i want be that prisoner, but more than petty crime. i'll confess another people murder, so i could die happily in my GODDESS stomach..
thank's for sharing
Author's Response: Cheers tuyulboy! I put that bit into the story because I would also be deliberately committing petty crimes, as I'm sure almost every member of this site would!