[Report This]Date: March 16 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
awesome ending. short an sweet. love her character, shes so life like its unreal. great job. cant wait to see where the next chapter takes us...
and hes getting smaller... thats fantastic.
aaron
Author's Response:
I often wonder how realistically I'm portraying the character's personalities. Thank you for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Only if he goes below, say, 3-6 inches. Otherwise, I think it safe to assume that he'll survive to receive a lot more mothering in chapter eight.
:-)
Date: March 16 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story, love the way its written and the interaction between Diane and her little man. I'm a sucker for foot related stuff to so the most recent chapter was awesome :)
Author's Response:
Hey glad you enjoyed it! There is more coming, for sure.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
YAY!! lol
great lead up to it too.
awaiting next stellar chapter.
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 16 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
holy shit... great twist.
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 15 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
"He's a sole man.
Doot-doot-doot-doot!
Doot-doot-doot-doot!
He's a sole man.
Play with it, Joe!"
[Report This]Date: March 15 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
As Mr. Rogers might put it:
"Can you say, 'love slave?' I knew you couldn't. Mr. Rogers was just messing with your head."
Date: March 15 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Don't want to sound like a critic, but chapter 4 and 5 seem rather identical to me? =D
Author's Response:
Whoops! Got it fixed, thanks for letting me know!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2011 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Needless to say, I'm off to the next exciting chapter, subito!
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
realistic sex scene. love where this is headed. an i love this awesome plot.
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
great anticipation... love the build up to whats coming.
aaron
ps when does she show us her feet?
Author's Response:
There is an incredible amount of feet to come, I assure you. Patience.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow... yet again great chapter. youve wowed me..
just one question, i thought joe drove there?
but this is the right thing to happen. i feel god for diane. joe showed real class.
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
awesome attention to detail. this story kinda rings close to home with me. what kind of a uniform do the employees wear?
an diane sounds so real for me... this story is almost uncanny how this reminds me of my past... its making me all nostalgic
great sorry, on to chapter 2.
aaron
ps this was really bothering me...
*good work ethic/not effort*
Author's Response:
I imagined the uniforms as a bright orange shirt with black pants. This story relates closely to my own life as well, and may or may not involve aspects of actual people I know. I'm super glad you're enjoying it as much as you are.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, don't leave us hanging too long.
This is a good start to a very intriguing story. I'm looking forward to its continuation.
Author's Response:
In all honesty, I'm almost done with the story, I just like to go over my work for a long time before publishing. Let me know what you liked and didn't like.
Date: March 14 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like I mentioned in "Coming Clean", I'm fond of your patient and credible style. :) And I'm already in love with Diane.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks a ton. I try to deliver a more "realistic" style, and it's nice to be recognized. Thanks for reading I'll have more up later.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the direction this story is heading.
Author's Response:
Excellent! Be sure to check back regularly, I update pretty frequently once I get going.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
And, after dinner, they'll have a little drink. In Joe's case, emphasis on the "little." ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: March 14 2011 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Something tells me he guessed wrong. ;-)