Reviews For Evolution
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 12:28 PM Title: Newfound Love

Thanks for the update! Can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!  I'll try to get it up as soon as I can.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 1:12 AM Title: Learning Curve

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 1:43 AM Title: Understanding Giants

Nice chapter! Cant wait for the next one! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks Emerald!!!  Thanks for the read and adding me to your favs list!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2011 11:55 PM Title: Understanding Giants

Some very good chapters with lot of different emotions going on. I will look forward to seeing what happens next. Who knows maybe one will grow wings when they evolved.

I been wondering what will happen if someone had a fake metal hip evolved. The only thing i see happening is that the metal spreads to the rest of the bones and becomes one with their bones.



Author's Response:

You give me something to think about Angel.  I'm thinking of doing the next chapter about the rumble room where we get to see a few of the giants in action.  I love hearing from you and thanks for reading and giving me something to think about.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2011 12:56 AM Title: Bitter Sweet

Thanks for the update! Hope to see another soon! ^_^

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 1:51 AM Title: A New Beginning

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^



Author's Response:

THANKS!!!!  :)

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 10:01 AM Title: Fire and Ice

Thanks for the update! Its neat that Anne is a aggressor! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!!!  :)

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 3:24 PM Title: The World Is A-Changing

I just read through all 41 chapters in two days, very enjoyable to read. I like how all the giants are getting their own "ability" that sets them apart from the rest. It's turning a bit into a fantasy story with the powers but I like it, keep up the good work. =)

How many chapters do you think it'll be btw?



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I know it's not the typical story for this site but it's been fun writing it.  I have two staries I've been going back and forth between on this site.  My other story is a little fairy tale called The Black Forest.  I not really sure when I'll end it, there are a lot of giants with a lot of stories.  I really don't feel an ending yet but I am really happy that you enjoy this.  Keep an eye out for more the next chapter and Thanks again!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 5:56 AM Title: New Growth

It's good to see that this story is still going on. It is a very fun story to read. I enjoy reading both of your stories that you are writting. You are doing a very good job on them.

Am happy that Sven's family is starting to come together and that they are all doing good. You are good at thinking of talents for what they can do and what class they fall under.

I will be looking forward to more chapters, very good job as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks Angel!!!  There is more to come.  I see some trouble on the horizon for our giants but they got good hearts and team work on their side.  I always love seeing your reviews!  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2011 11:06 PM Title: New Growth

Thank you for the update. The chapter was really good! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have another story called The Black Forest if you haven't read it yet.  I like adding giants to the mix.  Thanks again Emerald!!!

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2011 10:01 PM Title: The World Is A-Changing

Great Story, I hope you update soon. ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you Emerald!!!  There is more to come.  I've been hammering away at the next chapter.  Thank you!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2011 7:24 PM Title: Goodwill

Aww what a cupple sweet chapters the lest one and this one was. I like that girl Anne she is so swwet and cute how you told about her. Am happy that Sven took to her as if she was his own.

I was thinking also about the x-men also to how the Gaea House is starting to become like it.

As always you have a great way of telling your stories and how you wright it. Its a shame that not more people come forward and leave you comments on your great story that you are putting time into wright.

Well am sure that you are just happy that people are reading it and that you keep getting good and fun comments from me each time.

 

Like always keep up the good work and i will be looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

I look foward to your comments, Angel!  I'm so glad you are still enjoying my story.  The giants like to take care of their own as well as help others but they are especially caring of the children.  We'll hear more from Anne and some of the other children in future chappies. There is a lot to write with this story, I think I smell series in the works.  Thanks again for your always wonderful reviews!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 4:54 AM Title: The Heat Is On

That was a very cute scene with Jane and Sven as they had their time together. Its cute to see a small female with a giant male instead of the other way around.

Thats cool that Cody is superfast

Am looking forward to seeing what happens next with Cody and the six thugs.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words, Angel!!!!  I wanted to make Cody super fast because of all the running away from the bullies.  I had a lot of fun writing the dialog between Sven and Jane.  How could Sven pleasure her with being over thirty feet tall?  Coming up with cute little names for the foreplay was fun too.  Have you read my new story I just posted?  I think trying the fairytale thing would be a little fun too.  I glad you're still hanging in there!  Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2011 9:55 PM Title: Growing Love

A very nice and sweet chapter between Jane and Sven, am happy that things are looking good for Sven and that Jane is doing better with how things are going.

Sven seems to have a very nice abilitie he got as he evolved. Thor comes to mind for Sven.

As always i look forward to reading more. Great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch Angel!!!!  I thought it was a good way to explain that the giants mate for life and that you don't always love the same people you did when you were human.  I like writing Sven's part.  He is a conflicted character and to give him the ability to heal despite his past was something I thought would be interesting because I find healing to be a passive ability.  Sven was all about butt kicking and money when he was human and to give him a passive ability I thought would be pretty cool.  Sven is sort of inspired by comic book Thor with a touch of Tony Stark's attitude and sorted past.  I'm glad I'm still keeping your interest.  I already have the next chapter ready to go.  Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 10:16 PM Title: Love and Giants

Thats cool to hear that you are a female wrighter, i had a small feeling that you were a girl but was unsure. Its not very often i come across a female wrighter that wrights about giantess and giant stories. By now you may know am a guy.

Anyway, very sad to what Jane did, i didn't see that coming. Am happy for Cody and Lindsey. Not much else to say.

As always i look forward to reading more, you been doing a very good job on the story, already at 30 chapters in what seems like a very short time from once the time you started on it.



Author's Response:

I get a story in my head and I just go with it.  There is not too many outlets for orginal stories.  I usually write fanfic for True Blood and I needed a different sort of release and this seemed interesting.  Vampires and werewolves can get to be a little much at times.  I like to think there are a few writers out there that like to write outside the box and venture different paths.  I also like to make my chapters quick reads for people too.  I hate it when writers get too detailed with there stuff, I mean this is for fun and I am by no means a professional writer.  I love fantasy and giant stories are far and few between.  I thought, what the heck, this should be fun and it has been.  Thank you so much for reading and coming along for the ride, Angel!  Love some of the ideas you have put into my head!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2011 2:19 PM Title: Growing Hatred

I enjoyed the bit of drama that Jane and Dan are going through do to their growing familys and how each of them are handing it as their family grows bigger around them.

I like the part with the red necks and Molly. It would be funny if more red neck came back again with tin foil hats on thinking that would keep them from reading their minds and what be more shocking if the hats worked.



Author's Response:

I love it!!!  I never thought to use the foil hat plot device!!  I just wanted to give a taste of what the giants will be facing from the small world.  The drama with Jane will continue, I have something cooked up already that will blow the lid off and make an unlikely hero.  By the way, I loved writing Molly and Adam's parts in this story.  Cody and Lindsey would be second.  Showing Molly use her feminine was one of favorite pieces to write.  As for drama, what do you expect from a chick writer!  Thank you again angel for the lovely review and the stars!!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2011 12:55 AM Title: Growth and Prejudice

So the world is coming to an end. I will look forward to how it plays out for everyone. Its a new idea that you came up with for the earth to be changing the way it is.

Thats cool that Sven is evolveing also, i like him. And i think that over all he is a good person he just got hook in the wrong people when he was human.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're hanging in there angel!  I enjoy trying to come up with something different and unusual.  We'll probably get to hear more about Sven as the story goes on and the prejudice the humans have toward the giants.  I do this because I enjoy writting and I enjoy writting for people like you that enjoy my stories.  I know this is not the usual for this site but I like my stories to be a little more than just a little smut.  I like to write human stories and put the fantasy element on the back burner.  I think it makes it more interesting that way.  Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2011 11:38 PM Title: The Only

I  was a bit shock that chapters 25 and 26 were gone, but this new chapter 25 is great.

I been enjoying what is happening in the story with each character. Am happy for each new chapter you wright and that you haven't gave up on it for the lack of comments.

I know i have been the only one to be leaving comments on it so far. I like how  different this story is to other giantess stories i have read, the fact that you have male giants in it is a big plus to me.

You have been doing a great job on the story and i hope you keep it up with the good work.

 

On a strang note there is so many things in the story, that are close to my real life, Aaron is my real name, nick name happens to be my dad's name, he grow up on the farm as a kid



Author's Response:

I don't know what happened but I took the opportunity to revamp the chapters.  I consider this more of a piece of fantasy than a giantess story.  There are not many outlets for this type of story and I like to do something different.  I mean imagine what it would be like if the world changed like it does in this story?  The reviews are nice and I really enjoy them.  I find too many stories go into mudane details without cutting to the chase or it's just the same old, same old.  If you haven't figured it out, I like mytholgy and folktales.  I do my research on certain names and I like to write from the heart.  I also like my giants gentle and not mindless.  I also like to add human elements to my stories.  I like to put the fantasy element in the background.  I'm not a professional by any means and I appreicate your kind words, Angel.  This story may not be typical for this site, but it's worth a try putting it out there.  I'm surprised I haven't gotten criticized for not having enough giantesses and this is a giantess site.  Anyway, I'm rambling on... Thank you so much, Angel!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2011 8:47 PM Title: Young Giants

The kids are big, Lindsey and Kylie are over 20 feet tall, the two 4 year olds are 13 and 15 feet tall.



I would like to ask you something but am a bit shy to ask you.

I would like to ask if you could give me a small part in your story as a 30 year old, 27 foot tall male giant that when evolved grew anglic wings. Brown skin, brown eyes, and very dark brown hair, also name Aaron.

I hope you don't mind me asking you that.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2011 7:33 PM Title: The Big Secret

The story gets getting more and more interesting. I wonder how the rest of the world is dealing with the changes that the human race is going through. I wonder if any bad people have change as well or people that are frighting in wars and what not.

Am wondering is you can give me idea to what the giants IQ is, i know its pass what the test can go, am just wondering if you came up with a number for what their IQ points are for them.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for hanging in there, Angel! Their IQ's are five times of what they once were or maybe more considering that they are using all their brain power. As for bad people. we'll find out as the story goes. Got a ton planned out!

You must login (register) to review.