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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 2:02 AM Title: Revelations

I have just read this story from start to date, and I find that nancyarcher is a wonderful storyteller! I have also read each of her other three stories, and that  has only confirmed the fact. She should be writing professionally.

Granted, her stories each need to be edited for spelling and grammar, but any competent review editor should be capable of handling that detail. If this pen name is her real name, I shall be looking for it on the Fantasy / Science-Fiction shelves of all the major retailers!

But: FOR THE SAKE OF ALL THE GODS... Finish them please !!!!

Reviewer: clacker Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 2:08 PM Title: Revelations

ahh, i wish the story was finished..i like this story..i think the last update was in 2013.. oh well =(

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 3:24 AM Title: Just Dropping By

I been showing my support on this story from the very start and have been enjoying it also. The only thing that i didn't care for too much is the evolution from giant to titan. I like the size of a titan but it was all the powers that came with it that i didn't like so much.

I think making the giants grow and keeping the one special power they had would be enough. A line that comes to mind when i think of a titan is "Nothing unique they all look the same" i know they all don't look the same but it's more to their powers. I also find being perfect is boring in some way, nothing can be perfect.

So the idea of Sven finding a way to strip the titans of their extraordinary powers is a good idea but i don't think the powers should be all strip away, maybe he can find a way to keep the power they had before they became titans so they are just a bigger version of a giant.

I see it being made into a powder and having airplanes or  having a unique giant/titan that evolve wings spread it around the planet that way it can be carried by the winds that keeps giants from getting more powers than the ones they have as a giant. They will still grow to titan size but just with out all the powers.

 

I can't believe the story is up to 60 chapters now. You have been doing a very good job on it. I find it fun to know that a female is wrighting the story. Only because i don't know if am reading other stories on here that is being writen by females.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 11:33 PM Title: Just Dropping By

      Another great chapter, but I don't think you should strip the Titens of their powers. To me it would just take away from the story. I mean it is the evolution of humans and don't forget that animals are evolving too. So say they came up against a predator that was evolved and with some or all of those powers that the titens have, that was trying to kill them, they wouldn't have much of a chance to defend themselfs if those powers were striped from them.


 


I hope you update soon! ^_^

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 11:57 AM Title: Hope

Another great chapter! Hope to see an update soon! ^_^

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 6:54 AM Title: The World Is A-Changing

The Titans are reminding me why I don't like comic book heroes such as superman. All their powers just makes them seem boring and no longer relatable to me; they have psionics, elemental manipulation, healing abilities, and alteration powers on top of their massive size. The humans honestly have a reason to fear these individuals no matter how much humanity they've retained, I sure wouldn't trust them.  All it takes is a Magneto-like Titan to spark a dangerous powder keg.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 5:10 PM Title: Birth of Titans

I was thinking that because Ethan is a little over a little a year old it would be fun to see him unsure about things in the world like he is still has to learn about things but because he is so smart already i don't see that happening.

Thats the only down side i see that both giants and titans have is that they are too smart and that can leave out for fun things to try out for some of the ones that went from just little kids to adults so soon.

I wonder if the animals that have evolve have powers also?

May i ask to why you gave humans powers and made their bodies so tone and with no body fat as they evolve?



Author's Response:

Thank for the read Angel!!!  As for Ethan, he was raised around humans.  Keith never denied him time away from his human siblings even when he was evolving into an adult.  Maybe I'll tell his full tale one of these days in an off shoot story.  Ethan is an interesting titan who understands human nature because of not being denied.  Elisabeth and Tomas are a different story.  Jane raised them pretty much on her own with only limited time with Sven.  You'll find out that Elisabeth and Tomas only know of humns by stories the giants and the titans would tell.  Jane isolated the twins whenever Ethan had his special visitors. 

There bodies become adapt to handle their massive size.  The titans and the giants are majority muscle and bone.  The titans have learned to eat less than the giants too by their personal science.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 11:03 PM Title: Birth of Titans

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much again!  Not only for the encouraging words but for adding me to your favs!!!!

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2011 7:06 AM Title: Misson

Great chapter, I hope to see another update soon! ^_^



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Thanks!!!

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Date: October 12 2011 10:11 AM Title: Escape

Another great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^



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Thanks!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 8:20 PM Title: Escape

Am just asking. So the titans are immortal and have all the powes that the giants have so they could do everything run super fast, erase people thoughts, heal, are super smart, ect?

Am just trying to understand what is going on in some parts of the story.

Its good to see a few titans still think like people and not being like robots.

 

I wonder what is going on with other giants that have started or became titans in other parts of the country and world that are more out in public that have not gone into hiding.

 

I look forward to what happens with Ethan and who he may run into as he goes to find the rest of them.



Author's Response:

Your questions will be answered in the next chapter.  Ethan isn't like the others because he was raised with love.  Jane has gone a little crazy again but I have a feeling she will be set to rights.  Thanks for the review Angel!  I hope you get the answer you want.  :)

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 10:03 AM Title: Changes

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update! ^_^



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Thank you Emerald!!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 8:38 AM Title: Changes

I hope am not sounding to negative but i don't like to think of the Titans of being perfect. The fact that Jane called the humans creatures makes it sound like they have forgotten that they were once human.

Now for me i would like to still think of myself of still being human if i changed from human to giant and than to Titan. I wouldn't want to lose that part of myself and look down on humans as just creatures.

The titans way of thinking is not right. Like or not Titans and giants are still human in some way and they should not forget that.

Thats what i would tell them if i change into a Titan and keep that little part of me that still made me human and myself.



Author's Response:

Thank for you read Angel!  Keep in mind there are new titans now.  The titans will come around with the help of the newbies.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2011 10:37 PM Title: Secrets

Wow, alot of big changes and a war ready to erupt! Can't wait for the coming chapters! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!  :)

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2011 6:03 PM Title: Secrets

Am going to be truthfull and say so far am not liking the titans so much, they seem selfish and thinking to much of themselves of being better than the giants. I don't like seeing the families starting to fall apart because of this new change going with them.

I hope in the end everything works out for everyone.

I wonder what happen to the Aaron character that had the power with the animals. We haven't seen him for a bit now.

I will look forward to seeing what happens next. You have being doing a great job on the story. I can't believe that the story is up to 54 chapters.

 

 

This is just an idea that being running in my mind for a bit now and just felt like telling you it.

I had this idea of a giant that when he evolve that he didn't change much like the others, like he still like eating meat and vegetables. He also is not very telepathic but when he evolve the animal within came out, so he looks like a silver and black wolf with brown eyes and tail now and is faster and stronger than what is normal for a giant and even tho he looks big and scary he is infact very nice and carring to others.

I see him being called and ask to come to Gaea House, they tried to have him come back befor but he turned it down as his city likes him being around but with the new changes going on he comes back.

The giants are bit unsure what to think when they see him robes as not to scare anyone from seeing him but than he takes them off and they are bit taken back with his looks. But find out that he is very nice. 



Author's Response:

Hopefully your mind will change about the titans.  They are not as selfish as they seem.  The giants are realizing this is how they treated the humans when they first evolved.  The titans are improved versions of the giants but they don't want the giant to know that just yet so they just kind of stay to themselves.  We'll see what the titans do once the giant and the humans go to war.  Thanks for the read and the suggestion Angel!!!

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2011 10:37 PM Title: A New Day

Interesting new developments! Can't wait for the next update! ^_^

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 10:22 PM Title: A New Day

So all the giants will be getting taller?

Am betting there are more giants in the world than normal humans now. But i get this bad feeling from the line "but to bring down the humans spreading their venom" i can understand their fear to how the humans will take this new information but to me thats not the right way to go about things.

I know they want to keep their kind safe from the humans but i think they can find a better way to go about things tha thiking about war. If they go to war innocent humans could get hurt or killed.

The giants are very smart and should think of something better to what to do. Am sure that there is a lot of humans that would stand with the giants if Calvin Harper starts a war.

All what am trying to say is that it seems now the giants are starting to act like normal humans by starting armies and talking about bring down the humans.

But that is just my thoughts on it.

 

 

I look forward as always to reading the next chapter. I am very much enjoying reading the story. Very good work. ^.^



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Angel!  The giants aren't going to do anything until all the evil humans start it.  Right now they are trying to protect what peace they can.  They are talking about the humans that bash and discriminate against them.  I see the giants treading lightly when it comes to their human counterparts especially now that they are starting to get so much bigger.  The giants went from people being the size of dolls to action figures.  It's going to get interesting when all the giants grow into their new size.

Reviewer: EmeraldFlame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2011 2:08 AM Title: Single Giant Father

Great few chapters! Hope to see more soon! ^_^

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Date: September 26 2011 11:11 AM Title: Grief

Sad what happen in the last few chapters... I hope you update soon! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2011 1:35 PM Title: Grief

Aww that was two very sad chapters to read. But i guess a story needs a few sad parts every now and than. You did a good job on those two chapters and with the emotions of the characters.

I look forward to reading more of this very good story you have been wrighting.



Author's Response:

Thanks Angel!!!  Not all giants and giantesses are going to have it easy.  We are starting to see prejudice towards the giants as there are a lot of humans that don't like sharing with the evolved.

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