Well he story itself is very intresting with the romance and all and the discovery about the alien contact and all..but i have to adimt...Scotts strictly preference of boobs..becomes a bit ..very boring in  the long run. I managed to read till close after they confessed the secreto to Diana, still hoping there would be some more booty of even feet action..but no..always only titts.

*snore*

It's a nice start. I think I may enjoy this story, although it's too early to tell. Given the main character's age I hope there won't be aything too sexual, not that insertion and the likes would be the sorts of things I'd want to read about even if she was above the age of majority. The tags suggest this will be a clean story so I'm hopeful I'll enjoy it.

Pure genius.

Oh, yes! I definitely did.

Thanks for posting it. :-)

Heh! I wonder if Scott will be able to act like a gentleman (instead of a "heel")?

Hmmmmmm! It appears I spoke too soon, earlier. But, you've managed to put an interesting spin on the old cliche'. Carla is proving gentler than usual for such a giant abductress. Still, if Scott tries escaping from where she currently has him imprisoned, then I think we both know how she'll misinterpret that. ;-)

Whew! Another close shave. Thanks for not complicating things with the "abduction-by-a-bitter-rival-female" stereotype.

This story is proving good enough that you don't have to resort to that! :-)

Whew! That was a close shave, all right.

This should prove educational. ;-)

Wow. Chapters 19-21 are intense. From the man who brought Lisa Storm into the community back in the day. Great story, and here's hoping that another Lisa Storm can arise in this story.