[Report This]Date: December 24 2010 2:44 AM Title: Speck
You're a good writer, you didn't use too many adjectives like I have the habit of doing. (I would've called her a titaness or something, but you called her a diligent housewife.) One error I wanted to point out is "towards" with an S at the end is used in British writing, in American writing we use "toward" instead, without the S.
I was really curious about how Andrew ended up shrunk. I guess it's not important, but are you ever going to write a story that shows who or what is responsible for Andrew getting shrunk?
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
To be honest, in my other stories I did use such adjectives. But a particular topic on Giantess City as shown that people are getting tired of them, so I decided to cut back on my use of them. And thanks for the head-up. I typically spell-check my stories, but some errors still get by.
As of now, I have no plans to write a continuation of this story. It was written as a standalone story based on a fantasy I had, and I left it open so readers can wonder about it themselves. Maybe I'll change my mind in the future, though...
[Report This]Date: December 23 2010 11:16 AM Title: Speck
Yes, this is a very good story with lots of potential.
IMHO, it should be continued.
Author's Response: It may be some time in the future, depending on if I can think of enough to add to it.