[Report This]Date: December 27 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm reminded of that old joke that goes
"Knock-knock!"
"Who's there?"
"Sarah!"
"Sarah who?"
"Sarah doctor in the house?"
"Ba-DUM-Boom!"
Seriously, though: thanks for sharing this. It was just as delightfully bizarre as anything posted by Stan Williams. In fact; I'm surprised he hasn't reviewed this ahead of me!
Author's Response: I'm not sure why you think its bizarre, it pretty straight forward. Thanks anyway though
[Report This]Date: December 21 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would like another chapter that follows up on the "pet" theme.
Author's Response: Sorry but i wasn't planning to write another chapter for this one. Thanks for the comment
[Report This]Date: December 20 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this one a lot. I'm not much of a fan of severe pain but the rest of the story elements especially the parts about becoming her pet is what i liked the most.
It seems like it shouldve gone on though? i've noticed in a lot of your stories right when it starts to get great, the story suddenly ends. it wouldve been cool to see what she wouldve made him do after he became the cute blondes pet.
Author's Response: She wasn't actually injuring him. She was just trying to get him to give up. Theres no real damage, just a sore back and some bite marks. As for the end. He gave up. He's going to be her pet now. I thought that was an appropriate time to end it. Thanks for the comment
[Report This]Date: December 20 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. A story with a nurse being his tormentor would have been interesting too.
Author's Response: Like i said in the notes, the he would have been more willing with the nurse. Also in the story i say she's a kind person, so she wouldn't be a tormentor. Thanks for the comment
[Report This]Date: December 20 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is a good story. keep up the good work
Author's Response: Why thank you :)