[Report This]Date: November 28 2010 10:32 PM Title: Plot
A very well written story. Gracias
Author's Response: Thank you, Parrot. :)
Date: November 27 2010 12:20 PM Title: Plot
Pretty good for how simple it is
Wouldn't have minded more description about sliding down her throat, or maybe about being in her stomach.
Still enjoyed it though
Author's Response:
I decided to stop at the stomach because I'd rather not go into detail about the rest of the digestive process. I guess that's because of my taste in vore, y'know.
Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: November 22 2010 7:04 PM Title: Plot
Really engaging dialogue. Hard to tell the gender of the writer, as both sides are channeled well.
Author's Response:
'Hard to tell the gender of the writer,' Heh, that's awesome.
Thanks for the review, timescribe!
Date: November 22 2010 4:47 PM Title: Plot
Oh didn't get the email... But I will check my spam when I get a free moment.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2010 2:22 PM Title: Plot
Was shocked a how much I liked this tale... Not normally a 'vore' fan by any means, but there is something about this story that I find incredibly erotic.
Aaron
Ps what happen with your other story? An if this tale was truly anonymous than there should not have been any ages in the category... Just saying.
Author's Response:
Erotic, yes. That's what I was aiming for :)
I deleted my other story and sent you an e-mail about that, saying that one was a fluke. I can explain if you want.