Date: April 30 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, your still is awesome. The name is a pun on the phrase "A walk in the park" I assume. It's a really shame it hasn't been updated in two years...
I must mention on some occasion the speech is on the same lines as the description and this is not ideal. Other that it was good.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of the best opening chapters I've read. I hope you continue it.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello again Nostromo. I am indeed excited to read more of this masterpiece in the making. As always, fantastic beginning! You have an inherant talent. I have a feeling Brendan is in for trouble with a capital "T".
[Report This]Date: November 15 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well told beginning of an unaware shrinking story.
Please continue.
Author's Response: Hopefully this is not the beginning of the end for our diminutive hero , Safetypin ;-) Future will tell.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Phenomenal start, but really, I wouldn't expect anything but a phenomenal start.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading , DX, and the kind words . our little guy is in for his share of weird " phenomena", methink :-)
Date: November 15 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Submitted for our approval. The story of a man who is unaware--as yet--that he's been reduced not only in weight. But, also in height. A man who is the protagonist of a story by an author who used to write about post-apocalyptic giantesses. A man named Brendan, who has just entered...the Nostromo Zone.
Doot-DOOT-doo-doo! Doot-DOOT-doo-doo!
Author's Response: haha, wouldn't it be great to be able to attach a music file indeed to our stories, to create the adequate mood ? The Nostromo zone is not the safest place to be, agreed !