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Reviewer: mrchunks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now that's what I call justice



Author's Response:

I think you can agree that he had it coming.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

boy the feminist movement's really out of control, isn't it? LOL.

Author's Response: aparently timescribe. although i don't mind ;) honestly, this guy had it coming. a story with a genuinely bad guy getting killed is not as common as it might be on this site.

Reviewer: 360fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was awesome. I like that you left an opening for a sequel and maybe a predaceous future for Suzy. She likes Kevin and maybe she wants to get rid of who's in her way to get to him...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review 360fighter. You never know what this girl will do...

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