[Report This]Date: October 27 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
With so much glaze on her eyes, Nell must be a real sweet girl. ;-)
Seriously, though: excellent first chapter! And, with the hint that chapter two is going to include a giant lab rat (Shades of HGW'S FOOD OF THE GODS!!), you have guaranteed my readership of said chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Heh, I guess I did use that descriptor one time too many. Actually, I think I'm going to skimp on giant lab rat content, although it will have a bearing on the story's plotline. Good to see you're still around, Cary.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
great to read your stories again. welcome back.
the characters are great an very realistic. but really love the dialog as well.
an the ending is very foreboding, cant wait to see how you write more of the scientific jargon because that whole asspect is very interesting and believable. well done.
aaron
ps does this mean 'forest lake incident' is finished?
Author's Response: Hey Aaron. Belated thanks for all the reviews! It's been a long time since I've logged into Giantess World (I usually keep up more with GC), so it's nice to see that a whole bunch of people have been reading. Also glad you enjoy this new one.
As to the PS, Forest Lake isn't finished, but I'm not sure if or when it will ever be. The sheer amount of plot in that story began to become a bit too much, and I also realized that the overall story was on the path towards being very misogynist and kind of a downer - neither of which were my intention, just sort of the way things were panning out. Unless I can figure out a different way to finish the story, I'm going to keep it shelved.