Date: March 03 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well that seemed rather sudden but I liked it. Hopefully everything will turn out ok.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and I agree. I figured I could shake things up a little after 5 chapters of basically nothing happening other than the initial discovery and the dream sequence.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Fantastic! I love it when two tiny naked people who are in love have to survive together, and sometimes make love to each other, especialy infront of a giant, giants, or in a giant classroom setting. Kind of like a tiny porno. Here is an idea. You could make it that for some weird reson, Marks magic is starting not to work, and they have to survive being eaten by hawks, snakes, spiders, or escape giant humans by other means. Everyonce in a while the magic could accidently work again, and shrink another human too. I love tiny couple stories. I hope these ideas help?
Date: February 24 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's so nice to see this story back, but I wondering what happened to the speech marks in this chapter.
Author's Response:
Good point. Just changed them. Forgot I was using quotation marks, lol. After 3 years, I think it's understandable.
Date: May 06 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sometimes I want to escape. I wish I could be more like Mark. That would be amazing.
Date: May 06 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok now I'm not sure what to believe. If Kate perhaps eats like a pig then maybe she is fat after all? But I can't be sure. You haven't actually provided that much description, though I am liking the story so far.
Date: May 06 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I bet Kate is not even that fat. This is what school can do to people...
Date: March 06 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
please dont forget this one. i realy like it, shoot ill even help u
Author's Response:
I got busy during the past few months. I'm glad you like the story, perhaps I'll add a chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
what a powerful chapter. well done.
i'm really looking forward to see where you take this tale.
aaron
Date: October 26 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
I had dreams like this when I was little, and they terrified me. (Of course, nowadays, I find shrinking dreams desirable, lol) Very nice description, well done!
[Report This]Date: October 24 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Chapter 3 is my favorite. Very well done.
Hope to see more from you in the future.
Aaron
[Report This]Date: October 24 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
The pace so far is outstanding, the details an the descriptions are pretty good. But where this story shines for me at least, is the sweet gentleness an caring nature of the girl.
Gonna read ch 3 soon.
Aaron
Ps the story flows beautifully as well. Great job.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is great stuff, it seems we're into the same kind of thing, lol! Thanks, hope there will be more soon :)
Date: October 17 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a good read for me so far. We must be on the same wavelength somehow. :)
I can't put my finger on it. I like the story and I will continue to read it as it comes out. I don't have any constructive criticism; I don't feel like criticizing you for some reason. I won't offer any suggestions either; you do your own thing.
Date: October 17 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great opening! I would really like to read more, this looks very intriguing.
Date: October 17 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thats a promising start I hope you post the next one soon^^