I love the story so far and it is to great to be abandoned. Please continue it.

At the risk of jinxing things, I predict that this sequel is going to be just as good as the original story! If only because I like a moderately slow build-up, in a giantess/shrunken man story, myself. That is; one where the size-alteration doesn't over-shadow the plot development. I know none of the stories, here, are meant to be nominees for the Nobel Literature Prize! But, that's how I feel about it, regardless.

Uh-oh! It seems my liking your opening chapter has doomed everyone else to automatically disliking the whole story.

Or, maybe I'm just being needlessly paranoid. :-|

Author's Response: It's all good.  I found myself actually interested in these characters after my first attempt at a story.  The pacing will be a little different this time, focused a little less on the fantasy and a little more on the characters.  Although I plan to have it pay off.  Thanks for your feedback though; good to know I'm not submitting these chapters into oblivion.