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Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2006 5:00 PM Title: Part 1

Yo readers! Don't let good stories like this go unnoticed! And don't let writers auto-congratulate each others :-) If you like a story, leave a few quick words!

Author's Response: Hey Nostromo, I am a feed back sinner. I always print out stories and read them while I'm offline.

Reviewer: nostromo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2006 4:50 PM Title: Part 1

i've said it before but i say it again, i as just re-read your story tonite, rip: it's a beautiful piece of work. You took the time to build excellent characters, and the pace is never boring. Did i mention elsewhere you do have a gift to describe pretty women!! thanks again! it's a 10 so far! please bring us the sequel!

Author's Response: Hey Thanks Nostromo, I really apprecitate the good words. I have quite a bit of the second half complete but I have been pretty busy at work. Hope to have something done by the weekend.

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