Date: November 16 2007 2:00 AM Title: Part Four
I like the analogies that fit from the nineteen sixties. It gave the whole thing that blacka and white movie feel. Nicely done.
Date: September 13 2007 8:23 PM Title: Part One
Nice story! More of a story line than gts, shrink, crush, feet, etc.. But I still enjoyed it. I love the ending, Max Salem lives the life ;)
Date: August 23 2006 7:45 AM Title: Part Four
Amazing story that is well written. It would make an interesting movie plot.
Author's Response: Thanks, Vito. I actually think this one is less filmic than some of my other stories, but I can see what you mean.
Date: May 17 2006 12:54 PM Title: Part Two
Looking good, looking very good. Good idea to have those two story lines together. Awaiting the sequel, for sure!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments, nostromo. I was trying to hold off on reviewing until the series was complete, but I'm glad you liked it!
Date: May 01 2006 3:58 PM Title: Part One
hey, i really like this " film noir" intro! Looks like a serious story in the making! thanks NFalc, can't wait to see more!
Date: April 30 2006 8:47 PM Title: Part One
This story has me intrigued. I can't wait for the next chapter.