[Report This]Date: December 24 2016 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is one of my favourite ever stories on this website, love re-reading this story and love the pacing throughout. Lucy was such a sympathetic character and I love her relationship with Livia and her getting her happy ending. Well done on a wonderful story.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
You really bring the narrator to life, and give her background and her character depth. I also loved the image of the fairy scrabbling up the side of the bathtub. Really good stuff
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, It's always nice to see my stories being appreciated! Glad you liked it!
Date: December 24 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
its a great story i realy like your writing style
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: November 11 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very sweet conclusion. This was quite an enjoyable story. I think it would have been fun (and sexy) to see Lucy interact with the fairy world at her normal human size, rather than shrunken. But it was a good finale nonetheless. I see in the comments that you may do short one-off sequels so I look forward to that.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
very heart warming. love this story very much thanks for writing it.
dont know where you could possibly take this tale but ill be reading it no matter what. i grown very fond of these characters, something that all your stories seem to share.
aaron
ps have you checked out 'giantess city'?
Author's Response:
Haven't been to giantess city yet. But thanks for this great review.
The sequels will just be short (one or two chapters) stories, dealing with specific incidents where growing/shrinking is involved. This is a giantess site, after all ;)
[Report This]Date: November 02 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
written beautifully. the fact that lucy had to shrink to be transported was kinda logical yet incredibly awesome. like how lucy reacted to being tiny as well. an the reason they have to hurry is cause lucy will turn back into a regular human size? kinda forgot, lol.
cant wait to meet the queen.
aaron
Author's Response: Spells aren't that effective in the human world, so, yes, they have to get Lucy to the fairy world quickly.
Date: October 28 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it. Gentle stuff can be a rarity around here but you do it well. Glad to see you try a girl/girl sw tale too, you do it well.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you love it. There's nothing like a gentle gts story, in my opinion :)
[Report This]Date: October 25 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
god i know that feeling... hope that this anguish doesnt fill her heart much longer. poor girl has been through so much. great, great chapter.
i wonder what zanthia would have done to lucy with that glowing orb of light?
anyways im anticipating the queens approval so they will live happily ever after, but some how i dont think it'll be so 'cut-n-dry'.
aaron
ps watching 'league of extraordinary gentlemen' (got it right after work) thought i'd throw that in there, lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks again, although I'm almost sure you know it'll have a happy ending.
The orb would have stunned Lucy, and when she woke up she would have lost all her memories of the past week. It's a powerful spell, and not every fairy can use it perfectly.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love a story that takes it time, and I could easily see this story expanded even further, without loosing pace. Wish I had the patience you show when writing stories. I tend to get ahead of myself, so it's really nice to read something written by someone who has his/her head in the game...
Author's Response: It's always nice to hear from a new reviewer, thanks a lot! I also like stories that take time to unfold, because they help realize the characters more fully, and make them feel more like actual people you can care about.
Date: October 22 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
It seems things are heating up between our heroines. Lucy sure has come pretty far in a few days.
Re: Trows -- Yes, they're small, hairy, troll-like creatures that live underground. They're from the folklore of the Orkney Islands (north of Scotland). Not Celtic exactly, more a mix of faerie/elf legends and Norse trolls.
Author's Response: I knew I was on the right track ;) Thanks for another awesome review!
Date: October 20 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ps sorry for yet another question but what is a trow? A small magic troll... That has been bothering me for quite some time, lol.
Aaron
Author's Response: It is very much like what you said, a small, troll-like creature. I think it's from Celtic mythology, but I'm not sure. It lives in the islands north of Scotland, I think.
Date: October 20 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Honestly because aunt Ruth reminds me of ofelia's mother's. Just wish that she would have shown more of her endearing qualities. At any rate, will this next chapter be the last?
Aaron
Ps is the trow gone for good?
Author's Response:
Ah, thanks for clearing that one up for me, lol. It's been bothering me for quite some time!
The next chapter won't be the last, but the story is definitely near its ending. And yes, the trow is dead. He wasn't much of a match for Lucy :)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter. cant wait for whats to come...
aaron
ps is this the last we hear from lucy's family? couldnt careless about uncle and the cousins though.
Author's Response: The story is nearing its conclusion so, yes, we won't hear much more from the family again (until the sequel, maybe? ). Still wonder why you find Aunt Ruth so intriguing, though...
Date: October 19 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Now its getting interresting I hope you finish the next part soon
Author's Response: So do I ;-). Thanks for the review!
Date: October 18 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story. I too like the gradual development of Lucy and Livia's relationship. Given the time period, Lucy's reaction to the idea has been presented realistically. It's good that they didn't just hop into the sack together right away.
To Aaron -- Pan is the Greek god of the forest. He's half man, half goat. I assume the creature that visits the girl in Pan's Labyrinth is either Pan himself or a similar being (like a satyr or faun).
Author's Response: Thanks, though I must say, their relationship is developing faster than I can write about it! But I'm glad it didn't happen too fast, according to you.
Date: October 17 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Fantastic story. I especially like the way Lucy and Livia's relationship is slowly and carefully established. Very well written. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoy it! I'll try to post the next cahpter as soon as possible :)
Date: October 17 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love that movie as well. But why is it called Pan' labyrinth? I mean I get the labyrinth part, duh lol. But pan... Oh well guess its somebody's name. But yea the ending was sad but it was but she is now truly happy...
Author's Response: Lol, looks like Pixis answered your question before I could. Still, thanks for the review!
Date: October 16 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
RRRUUUUTTTTHHHHH!!!!!
lol. sorry had to get that outta my system.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
just throwin' this out there, but this story kinda reminds me of the movie 'pan's labyrinth'. i mean not the exact story verbatim, obviously. but it's really 'similar'. an thats just my opinion, you understand.
anyways, ill keep this short an sweet. i loved the last id say 7 paragraphs. this is getting really interesting. i just cannot for the life of me figure out the gordon(uncle) and edward(cousin). i, right now, wish they'd just die... but that wouldnt make for a very compelling story. an still aunt(forgothername) intrigues me...
aaron
Author's Response: Interesting...I'd never even thought of the similarities, but I see them now. I love Pan's Labyrinth (wish it had a happier ending, though), but the setting for my story is really more based on the stories of Enid Blyton ( I read them all when I was little). But, yes, both my story and Pan's Labyrinth deal with a lonely girl, with an abusive family, who befriends a magical being...just a coincidence I guess ;p
[Report This]Date: October 09 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
interesting... hope edward will have somesort of 'memory loss'. because the thought of him getting to livia, would probably be more than i could bear. or he'd just get shrunken;p(two-inches sounds good, lol)
but seriously this story is shaping up quite nicely. and the direction your headed an the pace of this tale are remarkable. well done.
aaron
ps this aunt ruth woman intrigues me greatly, hope to read more of her.
Author's Response: Interesting...why does she intrigue you, I wonder? ;) Oh, and Edward won't get shrunken, but I'm sure he'll get something coming to him.