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Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 6:54 AM Title: Planet Tiny II: Girl Invasion

this is ok but you could use some more work on stuff. its super short and you don't need to tell all the bio stuff, just show it in the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks I'll try my best. I'll try to think of more things, but a lot of info. doesn't just come into my head like magic.



Author's Response:

Thanks I'll try my best. I'll try to think of more things, but a lot of info. doesn't just come into my head like magic.

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