[Report This]Date: November 20 2014 6:30 PM Title: Pages (110-120) / 403
Oh, man... Those Melanie's series are so awesome!!If only you could continue this masterpiece
Author's Response:
I am working on it! Please make sure to check out The Realm of Melanie - Final Edition. I am making regular contributions to it of updated, edited content, sometimes including compltely new things. I'd love to hear your opinions on the series so leave a comment there if you wish!
--TFK
Date: February 14 2011 7:33 PM Title: Prologue
Easily the best soft vore story ever. Definately my favorite story in the GTS community. I was looking forward to it getting put back up, after revision. I'm glad its back, and I should have reviewed it sooner!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment! It brings me hope, :) More revisions are still being done and art is being done too! So stay tuned within the year for even more awesome things to come from this story! --TFK
[Report This]Date: January 13 2011 11:07 PM Title: Pages (240-250) / 403
So far it's a good read. It seems pretty similar to the story you had on here all those years ago. I like the parts where Melanie plays with David best.
Author's Response:
Its the exact same story, just revised, rewritten in some places, and completely edited. :D And personally, those are my favourite parts too. :) Thank you for the review
--TFK
Date: January 09 2011 9:24 AM Title: Pages (240-250) / 403
I am confused. What is the status of TROM in the deviantart account of dmoose ?
Author's Response:
You know, I'm not quite sure anymore. I don't understand deviantart and I'm not quite sure I like it. If anything, that is Draft 4 and what I am posting here is Draft 4.5, so this one is newer. I originally thought TRoM on Deviatart was fully uploaded, but I could be mistaken. I haven't logged into that account in forever. But, it's my account and still my story. I just don't remember at the moment where I put that whole bit. Anything to get the word out before I release the 'next big thing'. :D
--TFK
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 3:12 PM Title: Pages (230-240) / 403
Very good story so far, nice plot, id give it about a 4 1/2 out of 5. Each chapter is keeping me reading, and certain moments are sticking in my head. And if you still looking for a beta reader, ill be happy to~
[Report This]Date: September 26 2010 5:39 AM Title: Pages (160-170) / 403
Sounds like the lad really liked Melanie's melons.
Author's Response:
lol, you have a point there. I'm sure he did. I dunno what was going through his mind at the time, however. All we've got to go on was the written word! :O
--TFK
[Report This]Date: September 14 2010 1:36 AM Title: Pages (64-80) / 403
I toggled the rating option under the review rectangle. Is that the right way to give a five star rating.
The satire of giantessworld is a great plot device and makes it more real.
Also I like the calling to Troy after he's eaten, and him calling back.
Author's Response: Heh, the rating goes from 1-10 and the number is divided by two and thats the star value, so rate 10 if you want 5 stars. :D
I tried to make this story good, and I've certainly tried to make it better with this more recent draft! However it was never as it was meant to be, but all things do develope on their own.
And I agree, I thought that piece was a neat little bit that you don't see quite often in these kinds of stories. Glad you enjoy it!
--TFK
Date: September 11 2010 8:06 AM Title: Pages (51-64) / 403
GOOD STUFF. LOVE ALL THE VORE.
Author's Response:
I'm glad! :D There's a ton of it in this story. Sorry I've been slow posting them, I've been sick, xD But; do stay tuned! And don't forget to give a star rating next time to comment! :D
--TFK
Date: September 04 2010 12:37 AM Title: Pages (12-25) / 403
The original Realm of Melanie was the 1st GTS story I ever read, so I have pretty fond memories of that.
Are you going to make Melanie less violent here? I remember you claiming the original story became darker than you had intended.
Author's Response: I'm glad to have had an impact, thank you for your comment! I never really knew if anyone read my 'nonstory' words, xD
Well, I really wish I could, and I really do want to, and I have it planned out in the future. However in this version I just revised it completely, so I dunno if she'll be as violent as in the original draft, but it'll be better at least. Her character did become darker than originally intended, but I guess that's just how she developed. When I rewrite the entire story, it'll be even better. :)
But let me know what you think about this new rewrite as I post new updates. It is quite different than the original one I posted on the site all those years ago. xD
--TFK