[Report This]Date: January 11 2011 1:01 AM Title: Jamie
One of my favourites, love the olde timey setting.
Date: August 25 2010 11:09 PM Title: Jamie
I was sooooo hoping this would have some continuation. I'm very sad that it was a one-shot! it was amazingly written! please consider continuing it :D
Date: August 24 2010 3:15 PM Title: Jamie
I agree with Pixis, some indication of her size would have helped quite a bit. Maybe around 100 feet tall, perhaps? I still stand by my earlier review though - I love this story.
Author's Response: Yeah I'll try to be a little more specific from now on. Thanks for thinking it's not bad despite that though.
Date: August 24 2010 1:13 PM Title: Jamie
Understandable that pinning down the height is tricky. But even just an analogy like "tall as a redwood" or "big as a mountain" would be easier to picture than just "enormous" (which is pretty vague and open to interpretation). It took until the scene where Clara is between her toes for me to realize how big Jamie was. Again though, that was my only issue with it. Very enjoyable story.
Author's Response: Hm, I was always under the impression that an analogy was just as detail lacking as any other phrase, but I guess not! Definitely something that'll make my life easier. Thanks much.
Date: August 23 2010 11:29 PM Title: Jamie
Just finished. Love it, great story. That was certainly a unique way of stopping the bandits. And I like your take on President Roosevelt.
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch. The way to portray Roosevelt was something that we spent probably days deciding. As for her height part of the reason for it not being very specific was because hey, it's the early 1900's, how are they gonna measure her?
A bigger part of it is probably cause assigning a physical number to a height is something that's always been very hard for me to do. I am looking at some ridiculous online calculators though to help with it :D
Date: August 23 2010 5:20 PM Title: Jamie
I haven't quite finished reading this but I'm loving it so far. The 1900s setting is one you don't see often (at all?) in giantess tales. My only constructive criticism is to include just how big Jamie is. When she first appears, she's simply called "enormous," which was vague and made it difficult to picture her. Will leave further comment, when I finish reading.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2010 9:17 PM Title: Jamie
he took my answer.
;p
Author's Response: Glad to know more than one person feels that way!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2010 2:08 PM Title: Jamie
This is maybe the best story I've read in quite a while, well done! It's just unbelievably good, especially the introduction scene! The only thing I'd change is maybe splitting it into more than one chapter, otherwise, it's perfect.
Author's Response: The intro scene I spent way more time on than I'd care to admit. Glad to see someone else appreciates it though!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2010 1:18 PM Title: Jamie
There are only two words that do this one-shot any justice.
Absolutely awesome! :-)