What should i say? You're really good. This story starts like an épic tale lol no sorry i'm just a bit tired. It's great, and very well written. Better than i could have done, and actualy better than what i have done (yes i know, many people have surrely told you how great is your story, but ... i've nothing else to say ^^ ). I'll read it futher later, but you have one more fan ;)