Reviews For The Breakup
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

Curse Rick's male insticts! I'm egear to see what will happen though.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh no! I hope the punishment is nothing too harsh. Good chaper though.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is interesting. A few gramtical errors, noticably the use of "could" isntead of "couldn't". However, I still enjoyed it. On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Which reminds me: what DO you call two teenage girls having sex with a guy Ricky's present size? A "shrunken man-age a trois?"

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

If he survives this three-for-all, he'll never want to leave Kayla ever again. He'll be too addicted to the group sex!

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story. you should have some foot teasing. btw i loved the unaware parts

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

so many questions... damn im hooked.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well, if he's half the macho idiot I think he is, they'll probably try to demean with having him paint their toe nails (or something equally "girlie").

Although, as he seems to be only an inch or two tall now, it's going to be truly a Herculean effort for him!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Shrunk by Lily, and soon to be over-fondled by Jasmine. This guy's gonna be allergic to all flowers before this story ends! ;-)

Author's Response: lol i didnt even think of that

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fantastic Chapter. This was a marked improvement on the Chip/dip scene in "Honey we shrunk ourselves."

I hope he ends up in her mum's mouth for a while at least.

Author's Response: Thats not actually where i got this idea, it started with another giantess named katelyn brooks and one of her videos. thx for the review.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey great story. I'm on the edge in my seat anticipating the next enticing chapter...

The 'giantess fetish' part that you added was fantastic...

Aaron

Author's Response: new chaper~

Reviewer: The Critic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like where this story is going, it's well written, easily presented, and easy to read. I also like it due to the fact it features one of my favorite categories, 'Mouth Play'. Would love to see some 'Insertion' later, or even 'Butt Insertion'. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Author's Response: new chapter~

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