[Report This]Date: June 14 2011 10:50 AM Title: The Fall of Trysa
Great story, I love it! one of the best stories I been read lately, I love the way you describe the attitude of Jessica, and the fact that she is barefoot, and she loves to crush the little people without remorse or regard of their culture or the implications that could impact the world, they are just for her evil way of fun, I wish to know ow tall the little people were in relation to her, I hope the city was as big as those train displays you see everywere, with a 6 story building as tall as her knee.
Any way, keep the good work, I will read more of your stories.
And if you are a girl,( some times dudes use their girlfriend names as an homage to them) I wish i could be at your feet!
Date: August 12 2010 7:28 PM Title: The Fall of Trysa
Slight criticism: Modern technology DOES allow for holograms (unless it doesn't in the world of this story). They aren't the ultra-realistic holodeck kind you see in sci-fi but we do have them.
Author's Response: Geez now I feel dumb. So let's just pretend this takes place in the 90's :D. But thanks for the info!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2010 1:00 AM Title: The Fall of Trysa
Great story... Although it ended rather abruptly.
Aaron
Author's Response: Thanks, sorry some people think a lot of my things end abruptly. In my mind I think it's a good stopping point though, so I'll try to keep that in mind.