Date: December 17 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your teasing writing style and I totally adore the medieval fantasy setting the story takes place in. I know it´s been over 8 years since you updted this magnificent story but if there´s a chnce, please do. I´d love to read more of it.
[Report This]Date: October 21 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story, reviewing it since I am more active in the community these days and decided to send you. Gailina is quite an amazing girl, even though you arent interested in a sequel, do consider it as I am pretty sure I am not the only one who wants to see some romance between Gailina and Erryl.
[Report This]Date: December 11 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Do you think you will do a spin off? I felt a semi-cliff hanger at the end.
Author's Response: Maybe,sometime, although I've pretty much lost interest in this particular story. You're welcome to try a spin-off yourself, of course. Thanks for all the reviews, sorry I'm a little late in catching up on them.
Date: December 11 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Not sure how Carinne can be six inches tall when Erryl feel almost forty feet when she dropped him...
Date: December 11 2010 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love the last portion of the chapter. Guess the robber got what he deserved.
Date: December 11 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
One thing I would say is you mention the name "Gailina" before she introduces herself. It's wierd how the smaller giants hate humans whereas the larger ones are more friendly. That's not important, onto the next chapter.
Date: December 11 2010 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oooh, Sky Giants, interesting. Hopefully there will be a happy ending...
[Report This]Date: December 11 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dam, another amazing story from your good self.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Brilliant stuff! I only hope for more, perhaps a relationship between Gailina and Erry?
Author's Response: Perhaps...I can only wait and see, since I have some other stories to tell as well. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 08 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good story. Carrine got what she deserved. Will you be telling more Tales from the First Age? If so, I hope we can check in on Gaillina's progress with Carrine's redemption or see her help/interact with the tiny humans some more. The scale difference of the Sky-Giants is amazingly sexy.
Author's Response: There will be more tales from the First Age, but it will be a while, I'm afraid (there are other stories I'd like to write too.) I'd planned this to be the end of Gailina's tale, but, after reading this review, I feel I should at least give a sequel a try. (Of course, if you're impatient, and you feel up to it, you're welcome to write a sequel yourself. I'd be really interested to see what you come up with! ;-)
[Report This]Date: September 08 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
great story, loved the poetic justice.{as well as the foot rub, ;p}
the ending was great, how gailina(pretty name, btw) decided to try an turn carinne into a somewhat 'gentle' giantess, great plot twist...
well done, malaka.
aaron
Author's Response: I thought you might like the foot rub =) It was a last minute addition, originally Carinne came to much more horrible end.
Date: September 03 2010 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well hopefully she won't forget the little guy that brought her there now that she has another toy to play with. Hopefully he can show her that while much smaller humans can be useful as well in a wide variety of ways.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm certain she shares your point of view! :-)
Date: September 02 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with Aaron. That seemed pretty easy. There will likely be some twist or perhaps the villagers will not take too kindly to Gaillina. Should be interesting, whatever happens.
Author's Response: The next chapter will be the final one, but it'll be pretty long, to fully wrap up the story.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter... cant help but think that this was just too easy though. something will happen...
aaron
Author's Response: I'd tell you what happens next, but that would be spoiling the ending.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
lol... loved the ending.
and the journey begins.(unless something unforeseen happens first, which is perfectly plausible)
the fact that gailina is looking forward to having carinne for her own is very intriguing.
great chapter, yet again
aaron
Date: August 23 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Whoa, an even bigger giantess! Was not expecting that. I like that the Sky-Giants (or at least Gailina) are not overly antagonistic to humans but still consider themselves above them. Makes sense. Erryl will certainly have his work cut out for him getting her to help though.
Author's Response:
Unless he just hapened to have found the one Sky-Giant who actually wants to learn more about humans. Convenient? Maybe a little...
Its always nice to see reviews from you, thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow great description on the 'sky-giants'. and the mega aspect is not my cup of tea but it fits this story perfectly. and gailina's demeanor and overall attitude was remarkable...
cant help but wonder how erryl will ever convince gailina his plight is i guess 'worthy' enough for her to accept.
also wondering whats become of the lone thief that was following him?(guess hes just filler. lol)
and would carinne be approximately 2 inches compared to gailina?
anyways yet another magnificent chapter
aaron
Author's Response:
Hmm, quite a lot of questions, I see.
1) The thief is still around, remember, it was several hours after Erryl went in that he went into the cave.
2) Carinne would be about 6 inches compared to Gailina.
As for convincing Gailina to help, I don't think that'll be too difficult. She has become rather bored lately. Thanks for the insightful review!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
so what there was no actual giantess scenes, the story line/plot is awesome.
and adding the thieves in there was cool too.
well even if erryl didnt go seek out the sky-giants, its doughtful the poor guy would have gotten any sleep anyways with what hes had to endure.i personally think he did it in part to keep his mind occupied... but its still an incredibly valiant thing to do.
so he has his self appointed mission and he still has to convince a sky-giant(ess) to fight, and save his home...
looking forward to what will happen, and can you really beleave carinne when she says shell give them time to lick there wounds?
aaron
Author's Response: Thanks aaron, I agree with you regarding the story, just thought I should include some type of disclaimer, lol! You're right about Erryl, no-one hates Carinne more than him, and he'll definitely try anything to stop her. She will probably honour her promise about giving them a week, there are other cities to attack in the meantime.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well done!
I usually don't care too much for the soldiers-battling-giants stories, but this one is well written with some callous sexual intercourse included.
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! This type of story is a first for me, but I like how it's turned out so far as well.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
damn... carinne is possible the most frightening giantess character i've come across in awhile. well done.
is her sword like a claymore or katana?
well anyways the battle scene was incrediblly graphic and the gore was actually a welcomed change.
cant wait for ch. 2 of the adventure.
aaron
ps are there going to be people(fairy folk) in this tale that are smaller than that of humans or is there an actual mega giantess(500ft)?
Author's Response:
It's just a simple longsword, but to the humans it's much more terrifying, of course! Thanks for the great review!
PS - You'll have to wait and see what happens later, but there are fairy folk in this world, in case you're wondering.