Date: January 24 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fast paced and brutal giantess domination with a good use of items and the location, though it could use a bit more description as to what she looks like.
Date: August 04 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for your prompt reply, Emma (or is it "D"? I don't expect you to continue the short piece but should like to say that short stories are better than the long, drawn-out sagas. Well, at least you gained one admirer....and from across the great Lake.
Best regards, Tony
Author's Response: Just Emma is fine and no problem, your stuff is really quite good too :D
Date: August 04 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well done, D. I liked the short yarn so well that I've saved it and have made a number of changes. e.g. The victims actually see their executioner; they are all naked; and the girl is only wearing the tutu and shoes. One of the victims actually begs for mercy, but gets short shrift. O, and one more thing: while she's standing on the conveyor-belt, those close to her are given the ambiguous pleasure of looking up her tutu.
So, D, many thanks for the pleasure. I did not save the other short yarn because there was not enough "pleasure."
Author's Response: Well it is one of those things that I did awhile back and don't really intend on doing anything else with, if you wanna upload the version you changed go ahead, I don't personally plan on doing anything more with this.