[Report This]Date: November 10 2010 4:38 PM Title: THE TRIAL OF KAYTE'S MOM
This just gets better and better.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2010 4:36 PM Title: ALICINDRA'S HONOUR
I'm off to the next innovative chapter to see where this is going.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2010 8:40 AM Title: MOM-&-DAUGHTER DATING
I've run out of rhyme, so I'll revert to prose.
Way to go, Stawmi! I just hope his and Alcindra's relationship doesn't fizzle out, like Nonvor's did with her May/December beau.
Author's Response: It will be challenged heavily in my original draft for the next upcoming instalments, but I don't plan on it fizzling out. I think it's probably the hottest coupling in this tale to date (although not the most romantic, which of course is Jenyfer and Braisyde).
[Report This]Date: November 08 2010 8:35 AM Title: ALICINDRA'S UNINVITED GUEST
Oh, my gosh, by golly!
He was almost a human lolly.
Author's Response: The vore fans are still out of luck.
The most in this yarn is a suck.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2010 8:32 AM Title: KAYTE'S BIRTHDAY PARTY
It would appear that I was wrong
About this being the last chapter.
So, I'll delay no more,
The precious score,
And see what comes here after.
Author's Response: And sorry if I haven't left YOU many reviews. I'm flat out writing more Ambloome in every free moment I get now, and lightning storms here in Aust are making me disconnect the computer and modem frequently.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2010 8:28 AM Title: THE PRISON STRETCH OF GRASS
And, now that we have seen
How fruitless was Alban's collusion,
It's time for me to jump
To this story's conclusion!
Author's Response: You're such good therapy, you know that, second only to prayer.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2010 8:25 AM Title: WAR OF THE SQUADS
Whatever you plan next? PLEASE, don't fix up Alban with Alicindra!
Author's Response: Alban's based on a pain in the ass, who's been making my personal life difficult with similar nonsense. I just replaced what he was trying to ban with amulets, to tell this story.
I won't be fixing him up with anyone. He's staying in the Prison Stretch of Grass port-a-vault indefinetely. You'll soon see who Alicindra ends up with, and I plan to develop that indefinetely, with more instalments germinating in my mind even now.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2010 8:22 AM Title: ALBAN THE BARBARIAN
Whoa! Quite the action-packed twist. Just one question: who's R32? A dimension-hopping STAR WARS droid?
Author's Response: No, he's a problem with this forum's text converter or whatever technical explanation I dont' understand. I'm sick to heck of the way it reduces everything to bunched up prose if I try pasting from my PC, and then tells me that I haven't met 500 words when I have. I only get results as good as you've seen by using the Mac to post from.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2010 10:26 AM Title: YOU CAN'T MAKE AN OMELET...
I thought it was more of an allusion to the egg-eating "controversy" in the Lilliputian segment of Ray Harryhausen's THE THREE WORLDS OF GULLIVER (starring Kerwin Matthews). But, the only American "controversy" I can think of, off the top of my head, is the one about whether or not to put phosphates back into dishwater detergents.*
*In order to restore spot-removing capability, re: drinking glasses actually made of glass.
Author's Response: Sherry Alberoni made such a cute young giantess Glumbdalclitch in that movie (easily my favourite screen version of Gulliver's travels) some 10 years before her Alexandra Cabot voice in "Josie and the Pussycats" or her 1973 Wendy voice on Super Friends.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 4:24 PM Title: YOU CAN'T MAKE AN OMELET...
Your newest effort shows you're a great thinker.
Yet, even Shakespeare could write an occasional stinker.
"Is that the truth?" I hear all his fans beg.
Said Billy, himself: "One canst not write 'Hamlet' without laying an egg."
Author's Response:
Very good!!
But did you pick that King Shrubbz attempt to conquer for cooking oil was satirizing something in your country's modern history? Think what Shrubbz sounds like, and think what he was after.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 4:17 PM Title: DEVELOPMENTS FOR EIGHT
And, now, I see
(with second glance)
I've reached chapter's end.
So, I must advance.
Author's Response:
And Nonvor will battle the neighbouring High King,
Which leads to a victory, and plans for a viking...
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 4:12 PM Title: QUEEN NONVOR TAKES FLYTE
"...chased the frog until it croaked."
Super-lol!
Author's Response:
That pun was written with you in mind. I guess she had a frog in her moat.
At least this site is primarily for human vore, or Nonvor might have ended up with a frog in her throat.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 4:09 PM Title: SAVED BY THE BELLE
A clear case of Kayte's Mom-us Interruptus.
Author's Response: Kayte's Mom's role becomes far more significant in Chapter 27
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 3:54 PM Title: AMBLOOME IN AMSTERDAM
Well, at least Ambloome still doth like
Little Lee-John more than any [BEEP!]*
*This bit of censorship brought to you by the Children of 1984.
Author's Response:
Sometimes my mind has no reliance
On this yarn. So I write on LOT Giants...
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 1:33 PM Title: VICTORY IN TEASES
While the frustrated giantess Kayte
Pulled hair off her pate.
Author's Response: hairlarious!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 1:30 PM Title: TENNYCE'S AWAKENING
Alas, the giantess called Kayte
Was more willing to consume than consummate. :-(
Author's Response:
Carycomic relief.
He makes it brief.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 1:26 PM Title: AFTER DIMENSION TIDE
And, he said "Fear not, miss! I'll not hurt you. For, I'm certainly too small to steal any giantess' virtue."
Author's Response: Oh joy, he rhymes too. Who cares if the puns have scared the other readers away. This is fun enough
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 1:21 PM Title: TO LIGHTER HAUNTS
Aw! How sweet! :-)
Author's Response: Too many TV shows have all action and 30 seconds of down time. I went another way.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 1:19 PM Title: UP LATE ON A SPIRE
A very unexpected twist to the plot. A real white-knuckler! On the lighter side: "...haunt the realms of seamen?"
LOL!
Author's Response: It needed a bit of romantic angst.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2010 4:57 PM Title: THE WOOD NEAR A FIELD
They had no need, right then,
To tell each other: "I love you."
So, they just sat side-by-side,
Enjoying the deja view.
Author's Response: Oh yes. If you want something new, that's not just reconstitutions of old work, try my "Mrs Long: Secret Society of S.U.C.K." in Most Recent. It uses a time and date format that i think will appeal to you.