[Report This]Date: July 12 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: The invitation
Liked chapter 10 the best
[Report This]Date: July 12 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: The invitation
To be honest the beginning is kinda unrealistic "Hey wanna go get cloned?" "Ya sure" but other than that, nice story.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: The invitation
I actually love this story! I must admit, my two favourite scenario's with a giantess are being trapped between the buttcheeks and being swallowed alive, but surviving the journey to come out alive!
This story had both of those things so I enjoyed it very much!
Date: June 30 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: The invitation
pretty good. but I'm kind of a little anal on math and size. the crotch would not be the size of the empire state building in comparison to their size.
1/8" = 5 '. I know you said 5 4 but i don't feel like doing the math.
Let's say her crotch is 3 inches. 3/(1/8)= 24.
24*5 = 120 feet. The empire state building is 1250 ft tall. If you want to be realistic, you should say stadium or have them be 1/80th of an inch.
Author's Response: ok, thanks for the info :). I'm kind of new at this and haven't had much experience but I'll take any help I can get. If you notice anything else let me know, thanks.
Author's Response: ok, thanks for the info :). I'm kind of new at this and haven't had much experience but I'll take any help I can get. If you notice anything else let me know, thanks.