[Report This]Date: November 08 2013 9:54 AM Title: A New World
Hey cool to see this story back. Great chapter. I love Faith's choice in nail polish.
aaron
PS did you post a chapter 5 too?
[Report This]Date: August 11 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3: Malfunction
If I had to describe this cliff-hanger in one word? EXCELLENT!
P.S.---My compliments on the subtlety of your pun. I just got it. "Knot Rated R" (lol)!
[Report This]Date: August 11 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3: Malfunction
knot greatbuild up... love the plot and detail you've giving us thus far. please dont skimp on them when the interactions with everyone being shrunk happens.
well anyways, this story is such a pleasure to read that i cant wait for more and where you take it... i just hope that kyra or his daughter heard or felt the immense energy emitting from the 'machine'...
ps 1/10 of there height... so does that mean just over half an inch?
aaron
[Report This]Date: July 13 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
I agree with Cary. Only hope that there is more of her pretty toes. And the mom as well.
Aaron
[Report This]Date: July 13 2010 2:12 PM Title: Sneak Peak
OK, that does it. I hope Carson's friends DO get shrunken and played-to-death with by Kyra!
[Report This]Date: July 13 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Uh-oh! That's all a rule breaker like Kyra needs as encouragement; to be told NOT to go somewhere or do something.*
*Reviewer shakes head in pity.
Date: June 26 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Success
interesting start
[Report This]Date: June 24 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Wow. I'm thinking that you know a little bit about plot and character development. Lol. This story is going to be great I can feel it. Love that you've added the toenail color for kyra's toes. Hope there is more to come.
Also hope that you don't rush this story for it has the potential to be great.
Aaron
Date: June 24 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Really good start for this story. Looking forward to the sequels !