Date: November 06 2011 10:53 PM Title: Holographic Hurt (Part VI)
fantastic conclusion. love the cruel girl and her dialogue
Date: October 27 2011 1:08 AM Title: Son Burnt
Certainly hope to see another update soon, yours is by far my favourite series on the site.
Regardless, best wishes!
Azra
Date: September 08 2011 12:49 PM Title: Holographic Hurt (Part V)
These stories are so great that words fail me...
Please continue :)
[Report This]Date: July 26 2011 10:50 PM Title: Son Burnt
idea for more stars. you should make the first 3. have a secound edition 2 it
Date: July 26 2011 4:11 PM Title: Holographic Hurt (Part III)
Another great story Ace (or is that Jack?). You write very well, free of mispelled words and grammatical errors that so often distract from other's stories. Love the hologram idea too. Nice to see something fresh in the way of a shrinking idea. And of course your Mother/son stories are always fantastic. I think my favorite was 'Mom's the World' but you never fail to deliver. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Ace, Jack, whatever! :) I've been trying to think of something new for these types of stories, at least to keep myself interested.
Date: July 26 2011 2:49 PM Title: The Ex Files
what a great story. this girl really knows how to get revenge
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: July 26 2011 12:26 PM Title: Son Burnt
What a good ending to that tale! Your description of Ted's mindset as he did the deed was exquisite. I keep hoping you'll do a butt-centred story soon, but I'm sensing that's not your preference, so kudos to you for sticking to what you enjoy!
I'm more a fan of aware-stories because I think it addresses the psychological aspect more, so I imagine your new story set won't be just as much to my personal liking as The Smush Is Right was, but it's still remarkably well written and going interesting places. If you ever consider it though, I'd love to see another chapter of Son-Burnt or Promishment.
Regardless, great work!
Author's Response:
Sequels may be in the works. Butt-centered, for me, is an almost certain "dead-end" for the character (no pun intended).
[Report This]Date: July 26 2011 12:41 AM Title: Holographic Hurt (Part II)
Very nice, I like where you're going with this section.
Date: June 16 2011 4:20 PM Title: Son Burnt
What a treat it is to see this back in action.
Ace Jack always manages to craft an interesting story, particularly when he's doing a mother-son piece, and the psychological aspect is always one of his strong points.
Excellent work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate the comments.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2011 7:11 PM Title: The Smush is Right (Part I)
I hope "the smush is right part 2" will come soon
Date: September 09 2010 12:43 PM Title: Son Burnt
great stories. love the second the most
[Report This]Date: September 08 2010 9:02 PM Title: Son Burnt
Your latest is one the best pieces you'e written! I really enjoyed the nonchalant cruelty of the mother regarding her son, who I got the impression was either going to be crushed into a stain at night's end, or suffer emotional devestation for the rest of his life. Either way, this one really was enjoyable to read!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2010 4:20 PM Title: Son Burnt
Awesome stuff. Thanks for continuing!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2010 12:42 PM Title: Son Burnt
I think one of the most remarkable features of your writing is the restraint you are capable of in the interaction between mother and son. You never rush to the moneyshot but when it gets there it's well worth it.
Personally speaking I love the caring, certain tone used by your mother characters as they dominate their sons much more than when they are simply unaware, both Prom-ishment and Son Burnt are great examples of this. I'd love to see more work involving butts as well as feet, perhaps with a bit of squeezing as well as sitting, but whatever you come up with will definitely not disappoint.
Great work!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2010 9:54 PM Title: Prom-ishment
'back from the lab again...'
great chapter, loved this concept and your stories in general. hope to see more in the future...
aaron
ps if your taking requests... could the mother shrink her daughter an son so they could give her sexy feet some much needed attention...
anyways, great to see this story back
[Report This]Date: July 25 2010 12:57 PM Title: Son Burnt
We need more. These stories are great especially the 2nd one
Date: June 25 2010 6:32 PM Title: Son Burnt
Are you going to right more??? really enjoyed them.
Date: June 20 2010 6:18 PM Title: Son Burnt
Great to see you back in action, Ace! Loved the second story.
Date: June 18 2010 8:22 AM Title: The Ex Files
your stories are really awesome
Date: June 17 2010 9:15 AM Title: Son Burnt
Great story so far! I'd love to see some more "butt" then "feet" ah well, that's my fetish, can't wait till next part :)