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Reviewer: CuteMoeSoft Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2026 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Cute Little Sister

I really like how this one starts. The contrast between Haru feeling powerless around everyone else and then finding someone he can feel superior to gives the story a nice foundation.

Yuna's character is also fun to write, especially with how unaware she is of what may eventually change. I'm planning to keep the growth gradual, so there should be plenty of time for the dynamic between them to develop and shift.

Hopefully the slow buildup pays off. I'd definitely like to hear what everyone thinks as the story progresses.

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