[Report This]Date: September 11 2026 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Absolutely incredible
[Report This]Date: September 11 2026 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
The character building in the earlier chapters was so worth it and I really love this story so far! I can’t wait to read more!!!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2026 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
The character building in the earlier chapters was so worth it and I really love this story so far! I can’t wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really believe that character development is the most important part of a story, so happy to hear it’s paying off!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2026 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good, especially for a first story! Please keep at it, so long as it makes you happy
Author's Response:
I have been writing personal essays and stories since I was a teenager (which were mostly drivel) but this is the first time I’ve penned erotica, so thank you! I’m glad it’s hitting the mark for you.
Writing always makes me happy :) in fact I would be a LOT happier if I could solely focus on writing haha
Date: August 21 2026 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope my review didn't feel pressuring, just to say. I'm simply enjoying every word. Really love your characters and the messy way they interact. Love the way you're writing smells and the experience of Chelsea's feet. So thank you for all of your hard work writing this!
Take good care IRL! Totally happy to wait. <3
Author's Response:
Aww thanks Prophet, that's really kind!
Chelsea is actually based on a girl I knew (who wasn't gay sadly) but she did let me smell her feet sometimes... so I have a good idea on how to describe it hehe
You take care too <3
[Report This]Date: August 20 2026 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my god more please <3<3<3
Author's Response:
It's coming <3
need to focus on real life for a bit first tho :((
[Report This]Date: August 19 2026 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just wanted say good additions, and to keep up the great work. One question I had was about her loss of size. It said she shrank to a foot tall but was still able to fit inside the sock and shoe. Did you intend for her to be a lot tinier at that point instead of still a foot tall? But I really like this so far and can’t wait to see how powerful those feet and pheromones are when she’s the size of sock lint!
Author's Response:
That's actually a great point, I need to go back and add something about how Margot's feet would be poking out the mouth of the shoe. Chelsea does have big feet though, so a foot tall person could still realistically fit into her shoe, it would just be a tight fit.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2026 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is great, hot with tidbits of sweetness so far haha - I particularly love the descriptions of Chelsea's feet and how they smell, excited to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
What's a good foot story without indulgent descriptions of how they smell?
Thanks :))
Date: August 19 2026 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is really great stuff, the dialogue feels so natural, and so do the internal thoughts of her! I love a good slow burn, so I’m super excited to see where you take this next!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: August 18 2026 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, and I just kinda got that idea about the smell shrinking from the mentions about smell in the description and stuff haha. I also very much hoped that’s what it was!
Date: August 18 2026 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Welp, looks like Margot is going to accidentally make sure Chelsea finds out about what happened in trying to delete the footage. I also like that the two of them seem to genuinely care about each other. Wonder how their relationship is gonna evolve from here
Author's Response:
Accidentally? We'll see... Glad you like their dynamic, I'm aiming for it to be sweet but intense haha
[Report This]Date: August 17 2026 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great premise and start. I love a really descriptive tom boy, athletic character where big athletic feet and female foot stink plays a big role. It’d be cool to see how prolonged exposure to such feminine musky, sour stink at a tiny size not only dismantles her dignity, but her very sexual orientation. She literally will only be able to orgasm from that soul-crushing stink, and nothing else.
Author's Response: I think you'll like where I take this then. Thanks for the review!
Date: August 17 2026 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interested to see where this one goes! I always love a foot smell inducing shrinking story if that’s what is going on here. Either way, I’ll def check out more.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Was it that obvious that's what this would be? :P