[Report This]Date: August 15 2026 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just created this account to encourage you to continue this story. The premise sucks you in, it's very exciting and I love how you left it open ended on how growth will begin. I also really like the possibility of each girl growing in different ways, one with bigger bottom, one with bigger boobs and one more muscular, but of course all taller. I really do hope you write many more chapters for this story and I look forward to them. I might not be a big fan of shrinking or cruelty, but it's your story and I hope you will enjoy writing more
Author's Response:
While shrinking will definitely be a part of this story, I don't think it'll be nearly as cruel as some of my other stories are. I'm glad you've enjoyed it though, and you definitely have the right idea that each of the women will change in various ways, both physical and mental.
I appreciate the review by the way! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2026 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I just wanted to send you a message because I genuinely loved reading your story.
I spend a lot of time reading fanfiction and original stories online, and every now and then I come across one that completely pulls me in. Yours was absolutely one of those stories. The way you wrote every scene made it incredibly easy to picture everything happening, and I found myself wanting to keep reading simply because I wanted to spend more time with your characters and the world you built.
One of the things I enjoyed most about your writing was how naturally everything unfolded. The pacing never felt rushed, every emotional scene landed perfectly, and your characters felt authentic from beginning to end. They felt like real people, and that's honestly what kept me hooked throughout the entire story.
While I was reading, I kept imagining how beautifully your story would translate into a comic. So many scenes already felt cinematic in my head, and I could easily picture them as illustrated pages. That's actually one of the reasons I wanted to reach out to you.
I was also curious about something. Had you been planning this story for quite a while, or was it an idea that came to you unexpectedly? I'd genuinely love to know how it all started because I always find it fascinating to hear about the inspiration behind different writers' stories.
I'm a professional digital artist who specializes in comic adaptations, character illustrations, and cover art. I truly enjoy collaborating with authors because helping bring stories they've worked so hard on into a visual format while staying faithful to their original vision is one of the most rewarding parts of what I do.
If you'd ever like to see some of the comics and artwork I've created, I'd be happy to share my portfolio with you:
Twitter/X Portfolio:
https://x.com/MFoylee/media
You can also reach me on Discord:
dizzysketchie
Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful day!
[Report This]Date: August 08 2026 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hehe. My guess is already some of those men, if deemed worthy, were unbirthed and reborn as amazons. The others gave their lifeforce to the convent.
Anyway, as usual, nice characterisations! You seem rather focused on 'westerner in japan' kind of setups, and on japanese women growing into amazons in particular.
In this story, I could imagine Jack first appearing as if he's creating conflict (sistets being jealous/possessive) but turns out to be helpful in actually resolving some deep-seated issues between them that had been festering long before his arrival. And then they find some way of utilizing the reawakened mountain in a way that calls less immediate attention and hostility but ensures to slowly spread its effect, create other places worldwide, etc , New World Order territory, hehe
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm pretty curious where people think this story will go, or how they interpret the legend and dream in this first chapter. There are a ton of possibilities, and I have some good scenes in mind.
I'm actually a Canadian living in Japan. Have been for about 11 years now. That's probably why I lean towards foreigner in Japan plots, as that's what I know!
My goal with this piece, and many other pieces involving size-change, is to examine how behavior and relationships change as size changes. At the moment I'm not sure whether this series will go lighter, darker, or hang around somewhere in the middle. Keep reading to find out ;)