Reviews For EMbrassing times
Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Date: June 11 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Not a bad story, but you really need to keep track of your charaters, in one chapter Sakura is Yu's cousin, in the nextshe's his sister!
Reviewer: IttyBittyAbby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: June 08 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
other than the incest, in my opinion that was a good story! Loving the SW angle, too.
Author's Response: ya kinda want to re write those parts because my friend wrote those parts, and it kinda grosses me outso i try to think past it