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Reviewer: GGMY Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

GREAT!! one of the best on this site!!



Author's Response:

Thanks my friend, i hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: Gaarasama Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 26 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

awesome! trapped in her converse and going to work with her hehe.. Keep em coming! :)



Author's Response:

yup, one of my favorite segments.

Reviewer: zacharyded Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love the wine drinking part

Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

really really really great, lol, your a great writer

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

I just read the 12 chapters in one sitting. What a fantastic story. I can't wait to see whats next



Author's Response:

Wow, thats quite a bit of reading in one shot. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: polkmn Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love this story, plz keep the chapters coming



Author's Response:

I try to do chapters as often as i can, but it doenst always work out. Im trying hard to complete the story as i hate incomplete stories myself so idont want to do that to my readers.

Reviewer: jman100k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story! I'm glad you're continuing with it. Love the shoe/sock interactions.



Author's Response:

 Thanks for reading, there will be more foot scenes to be had.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

wow this story is taking another direction. an i for one love it. im on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

aaron

Reviewer: Gaarasama Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome new chapter! :)

Reviewer: Gaarasama Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

forgot to rate haha

Reviewer: Gaarasama Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love where this story is going :). Hopefully there will be some katharine sandal/slipper action lol.  And I'm g;ad Chelsea's coming back. They're both see evil haha

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

that actually sounds quite horrifying to be trapped in saliva soacked toothpaste all night. as always great job at bringing these characters to life. cant wait to see what katherine does with/to samantha.

awesome story an i hope that you will continue.

aaron
ps will you add a scene where katherine may either force her parents to partake in marijuana consunption or just partake in it herself knowing they cant do a thing about it.

Author's Response:

That shouldn't be to hard to fit in with what i have planned.  I'm glad your enjoying the story. Its been fun to write.

Reviewer: Gaarasama Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Glad you're back man! more Chelsea please! lol :P



Author's Response:

chelsea has a part a bit later

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

missed this epic story. an it seems that that this story is dare i say it even better. awesome chapter, an thanks for continuing.


aaron

Author's Response:

thanks sorry for the long delay. My goal is to have chapters out approximately every couple weeks from here on out.

Reviewer: Sweet_girl477 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

Any particular reason that the dads name started as Greg but now is Steven?

Author's Response:

yeah, i'm working on two stories one of which isnt gts related. But the fathers name is Steven. At the time I wrote some of these chapters i was also writing that story. I would alternate nights. So i would cross the characters, then when I proofed it, I wouldnt always catch it. However, i have sense gone back and corrected that error.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

chapters 7 and 8 are really great



Author's Response:

Those are my favorites too thus far, although i have some great moments int he outline uphead that i hope translate well to paper.

Reviewer: Gaarasama Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

very awesome new chapter :)  can't wait for more

Reviewer: blackguyj2009 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 08 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd love for the mother to be destroyed by the daughter and friend...and maybe she take a liking to her father. It dont got to be a sexual liking, but maybe the mom was too bitchy...and the daughter and father really want her out of the way or something.

Maybe add some farting on the mother too!

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

what happened I have been waiting for this story to continue...this stuff is gold hope you have more coming soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks, new stuff is posted now.

Reviewer: blackguyj2009 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can you add more to this story. I love to see the friend punish the girl's mother severely.

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