[Report This]Date: August 20 2026 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story so far. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2026 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for answering mate we could connect over discord se we can discuss it in detail my discord is: dizzysketchie
[Report This]Date: July 13 2026 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I recently finished your story, and I really enjoyed your writing style. The only thing I'm still trying to wrap my head around is the ending. I have a few questions that I feel only you could answer, and I'd also love to share some of my own thoughts with you. If you'd be open to it, could we continue our conversation on email? my email is avaartistic01@gmail.com
Author's Response:
Hey, Thanks for the review.
Its not finished yet. Still more to come
Next chapter is Racheal and the tiny city, which ive been building towards since the first time they met
[Report This]Date: July 11 2026 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I just wanted to reach out and tell you how much I genuinely enjoyed your story.
I read a lot of fanfiction and original stories online, and every so often I come across one that completely captures my attention. Yours was definitely one of those. Your writing made every moment feel so vivid that I could easily imagine everything happening, and I kept reading because I genuinely didn't want to leave your characters or the world you'd created.
One of the things I admired most was how effortlessly everything came together. Nothing felt rushed, every emotional moment felt meaningful, and your characters felt incredibly believable. They came across like real people, and that's honestly what kept me invested all the way through.
As I read, I couldn't stop thinking about how incredible your story would look as a comic. There were so many scenes that already felt cinematic in my imagination, and I could clearly picture them becoming illustrated pages. That's actually what encouraged me to reach out to you.
I'm a professional digital artist specializing in comic adaptations, character illustrations, and cover art. I genuinely enjoy working with authors because it's incredibly rewarding to help transform stories they've spent so much time creating into a visual format while preserving everything that makes those stories special.
If you'd ever like to see some of the comics and artwork I've created, I'd be more than happy to share my portfolio with you:
Twitter/X Portfolio:
https://x.com/MFoylee/media
You can also reach me on Discord:
dizzysketchie
There's absolutely no pressure at all. Even if artwork isn't something you're looking for right now, I simply wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story and thank you for taking the time to share it. I truly hope you continue writing because I'd absolutely love to read more of your work in the future.
Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful day!
Author's Response:
Hey, wow thanks for the review!
Yeah I don't mind at all. creating a comic would be freaking amazing hah!
I do have photos of Racheal already.
I'll try add them to the story so you can get an idea of what she looks like in my mind.
Date: July 11 2026 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
I already did a Review after 6 chapters and i love the way it turns now in chapter 14/15. Great story my friend.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2026 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this size and scenario!
Date: July 06 2026 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
That strange feeling that both are going to shrink 1 mm in front of an unaware Chloe
Date: July 05 2026 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy Shit, 6 chapters in and i love t. I can't wait for more from you...
Author's Response:
Holy crap.. was not expecting a review! Thanks man.
I'll post all the chapters i have currently