Date: August 22 2026 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Homeward Bound
I’m loving this story so far, it’s a great unaware story. I admit I would love to see a full on unaware vore scene at some point, but nonetheless, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the positive feedback, I really do appreciate it. Stay tuned for more!
Date: July 28 2026 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Homecoming
The premise the story is unique. Jack ability to experience human emotions and desires for an opposite sex attraction despite being a worm makes this story one of a kind.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: July 13 2026 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Homecoming
I recently finished your story, and I really enjoyed your writing style. The only thing I'm still trying to wrap my head around is the ending. I have a few questions that I feel only you could answer, and I'd also love to share some of my own thoughts with you. If you'd be open to it, could we continue our conversation on Discord? My Discord is artisioa.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2026 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Homecoming
Hi! I just wanted to reach out and tell you how much I genuinely enjoyed your story.
I read a lot of fanfiction and original stories online, and every so often I come across one that completely captures my attention. Yours was definitely one of those. Your writing made every moment feel so vivid that I could easily imagine everything happening, and I kept reading because I genuinely didn't want to leave your characters or the world you'd created.
One of the things I admired most was how effortlessly everything came together. Nothing felt rushed, every emotional moment felt meaningful, and your characters felt incredibly believable. They came across like real people, and that's honestly what kept me invested all the way through.
As I read, I couldn't stop thinking about how incredible your story would look as a comic. There were so many scenes that already felt cinematic in my imagination, and I could clearly picture them becoming illustrated pages. That's actually what encouraged me to reach out to you.
I'm a professional digital artist specializing in comic adaptations, character illustrations, and cover art. I genuinely enjoy working with authors because it's incredibly rewarding to help transform stories they've spent so much time creating into a visual format while preserving everything that makes those stories special.
If you'd ever like to see some of the comics and artwork I've created, I'd be more than happy to share my portfolio with you:
Twitter/X Portfolio:
https://x.com/MFoylee/media
You can also reach me on Discord:
dizzysketchie
There's absolutely no pressure at all. Even if artwork isn't something you're looking for right now, I simply wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story and thank you for taking the time to share it. I truly hope you continue writing because I'd absolutely love to read more of your work in the future.
Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful day!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2026 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Hospitality
Really good so far ^_^ and interesting setting
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: July 06 2026 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Homecoming
This is a cool concept.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's inspired by the intelligent parasitic lifeform trope that are in some of my favourite sci-fi shows
Date: July 06 2026 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hospitality
I just finished reading part 3, and I have a few things to say. The transitions between scenes are abrupt, especially between chapters. The characters lack depth, so they risk becoming flat and predictable. I love the way the story unfolds; you really grasp the essence of the world of the giantesses, the incredible scales and sensations. I love this story; it's one of my favorites to read. I've always thought that writing and publishing is incredibly difficult. You have my utmost respect; anyone can have an opinion and share their point of view, but that will always be surpassed by those who have the courage to write and publish. I love this. I hope you already have the story planned and don't leave us like so many others unfinished, waiting for the next chapter of the saga. This world is fascinating.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback.
There's going to be a couple of minor time skips to help move the plot along but I will have some chapters be a direct continuation of what happened in the previous one, such as chapters 4 and 5.
I do intend to finish this story, I've already got the next few chapters drafted and they just need a proof read / minor editing before I publish them.
Overall this story will be 9 chapters long.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2026 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Hospitality
I have to admit that this is the first time I've seen a story like this, and I love it. Besides the atmosphere described, I love the types of giantesses that have appeared so far. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Agreed that it's something a bit different from what you usually see!
Date: July 05 2026 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Heat
I love the way the conflict develops in the story. The handling of the scale makes you feel the immensity not only of the characters but also of the conflict and the adventure. I love the giantess content and how you're handling it. I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapters. I loved this story.
Author's Response:
Next chapter is already up, enjoy!
Date: July 05 2026 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Homecoming
I really enjoyed reading this story. I loved the concept you used as a base, the characters are incredible, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters. I hope you have a couple more chapters ready soon; I want to know more about this world you've created and see where the story is going. You'll immediately generate a conflict, and this will create an interesting reading experience. It's the best! Keep developing the story as it is; I'd love for you to upload more chapters. I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review and for the positive feedback, this is the first time I've published something I've written on the Internet, so your comments really do mean a lot.
More chapters will be dropping during the next few days, so stay tuned!