Date: July 20 2026 10:41 PM Title: Plans Have Changed
I really really like this story. I love the Bad Ending at the start of the story that just continues to get worse. I only hope Sam manages to keep long-term possession of Ashley! They are besties, after all :3
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for the review and feedback! I'm glad it was an enjoyable read so far! Hope it continues to be so as it continues.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2026 7:03 PM Title: Plans Have Changed
I hope things will get better for Ashley, even with the hint at permanent damage, two chapters ago, it seems unlikely. Though, while she was quite haughty, of these two, there's one side that betrayed and proceeds to permanently torture her supposed "friend".
It kind of harms my sense of morals seeing the as**ole winning and getting away scot-free with their profit. So I hope things will switch up.
Author's Response:
Hey there! Thanks for the feedback!
Totally hear you if the vibe and trend of the plot in this one isn't your jam; darker/cruel stories like this where there isn't a fair/happy ending for everyone are definitely a specific taste, though by the same token that's a big part of what makes it hotter for folks who dig it as well! But I appreciate you reading and giving it a shot either way even if it doesn't end up quite how you'd want or hope!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2026 6:28 PM Title: Plans Have Changed
The cruel casualness of her basically just taking her life away is really hot and interesting
Now I'm imagining some kind of scenario where Sam manages to get another indefinite tiny, maybe some clueless guy, and then debates between keeping him as her own toy or swapping him in for Ash. Or swapping him then not necessarily growing her back anyway
Great stuff looking forward to seeing where it goes
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad it's been a hot and enjoyable read so far.
And yeah, I've definitely kicked around a few different ideas for the possibility of other tinies. But I'm also intrigued by the idea of going down a plot road where it's like, the longer Ashley is in the beads, the more adapted to her as their 'power source' they become: getting more efficient, unlocking new features, etc. And so that would give Sam even more twisted justification to think that she can't start over with someone new and go back to zero, pushing her even closer toward seeing Ashley as irreplaceable. But we'll see where it goes as I get the rest on the page--thanks as always for reading!
Date: June 22 2026 5:24 PM Title: The Big Idea
Love this story..so cruel.so I wonder if the next chapter will be about a girl/guy shrunk down and strapped into a hole carved within the insole of some sorority girl' shoe. Even a Birkenstock would be ok. Btw, added to favourites
[Report This]Date: June 21 2026 9:38 AM Title: Snap Decisions
Haha seems I.had it a little wrong, I expected Sam's ass to be the finale not the opening act . Glad she's almost in a.butt though.
Her being trapped inside the bead is pretty cool, though now this last chapter made me mad at her. Almost want there to be a secret button or something that makes the walls of that bead sort of cave in until they're tight around her except her head is sticking out, so she can still get the experience of having her face dragged along someone's anus.
I hope Samantha can talk to her whenever she wants since she shrunk her. Would be fun to have her check in periodically and be like"Hey Amanda just checking in whose ass are you in right now?" during a sorority party
Author's Response:
Thanks! And hah, yeah, I decided I wanted to jump into some action a bit quicker on this one. Stay tuned though; it's possible some of the elements you mentioned might get worked in.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2026 3:24 AM Title: The Big Idea
Really like where this is going and the banter between the two.
I am curious with how you wrote her taking her thong off. Have you considered inanimate transformation into thongs or even body part transformations into someone’s ass?
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your feedback and I'm glad it's been a good read.
And to your question, I do enjoy inanimate TF stuff as well as shrinking/giantess content, it's something I'm meaning to get around to writing a bit more of. I actually have one TF story on this site that is both heavily thong-focused and includes some other TF stuff (like body part TFs) as well, if you haven't come across it and are interested. Here's the link: https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=16631&index=1
(Just an FYI that that story get preeettty explicit so double check the tags in case there's any kinks/other stuff that might not be your thing. But hope it's a good read if you check it out!)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2026 1:04 AM Title: The Big Idea
Really enjoying this one so far. Especially the thought that if Ashley hadn't freaked so much Sam probably wouldn't have been as bad. I'm kinda hoping the sorority decides to keep Ashley as the permanent source inside the beads lol
Author's Response:
Thanks! Love when a tiny gets too uppity and accidentally makes things even worse for themself, hah.
And there might be a few twists in the story but definitely gonna be some hard decisions to be made about how to keep this fantastic toy powered, for sure.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2026 3:55 AM Title: The Big Idea
I am absolutely in love with this story concept. Obviously Samantha is going to have to shrink Ashley and offer her up with the anal beads, and the sorority council will have to respect the girl who wants in so bad she turns her own roommate into a living butt plug. Samantha could even say something about how technically Ashley will be "In" the sorority, just specifically in their asses.
And then once Samantha is inducted, obviously she will have to try out the toy too and Ashley will go up her butt, amazing.
In a different review I left, you responded saying I should DM you. How would I do that? Are you on Discord?
Author's Response:
Thanks! And DAMN, my stories must be getting too predictable...I'm definitely too in love with the same themes over and over again, hah.
But yeah, I've always been super intrigued by the idea of the whole "trapped in a sex toy" concept, so been wanting to explore something like this for awhile. Although it might still play out very slightly differently than you predict!
And yes, I'm on Discord, you can hit me up there @ sapphiriclore. I don't always get to check it super often but will definitely respond eventually! Thanks as always for the feedback!