[Report This]Date: September 03 2026 3:10 PM Title: Delivery Day
An extremely well-written story. I only just stumbled upon it and have read all the parts. I really like the dynamic between the two of them and the characterization. I’m very curious to see how she’ll show him, despite his fetish, that his life is going to be hell from now on.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2026 9:33 PM Title: A Tense Household
Loved the last little game she played with him before revealing herself. That was fun. I look forward to him finding out she was Velvet Goddess, and trying to have to defend that he doesn't actually want this despite telling her he wanted to be shoved up her ass before.
And still think it would be fun if this story eventually gets to a point where he's actually happy to be her toy, but she also likes and cares about him more too. I think it would be genuinely fun if what started as her trying to get rid of him from a place of hate turns into a more understanding and good dynamic between them, both of them realizing they're getting something fun that they want, and understand each other better
[Report This]Date: August 13 2026 3:40 AM Title: Welcome to ShrinkHaven
Can’t wait to read more ^_^
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and for the review and feedback! There's definitely more coming so I hope it remains a good read.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2026 8:52 PM Title: Hi, I’m VelvetGoddess!
Love the setup so far. Looking forward to Evan maybe getting reacquainted with that thin thong and/or buttplug once he's a smaller size.
Author's Response:
Heyo, thanks for the review and I'm glad it's been a good read so far! Can't promise anything or spoil anything with too much detail, but almost anything is very much on the table, including what you're insinuating :D
[Report This]Date: July 29 2026 9:33 PM Title: Hi, I’m VelvetGoddess!
The revelation that he does indeed think of her with the fantasies was well done. Her almost reconsidering, only to go for it at the end because of the sibling inheritance spat was fun. Lots of different ways things can go. Whether she succeeds in permanently owning him, or they both realize they enjoy it later on, and they come to an agreement on the inheritance, and he grows back, but shrinks for her sometimes as an ongoing arrangement or something. Lots of potential options and looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! Glad it's been a fun read so far. And yeah, I have a decently solid idea of where to take their relationship over the course of the story but I have tried to leave some possibilities open in case I want to make any shifts at certain points, hope it continues to make for a good read!
Date: July 29 2026 4:48 PM Title: Hi, I’m VelvetGoddess!
Holy Shit, this story is so so good. Can't wait for more. You put very much work into that.
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for the review and feedback! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far and looking forward to more! Hope the rest continues to satisfy as I add to it!
Date: July 29 2026 1:26 AM Title: A Tense Household
I love everything about your story. The discussion with velvetgoddess was amazing. It was so good that I was hoping she'd tease him a little more especially about his attraction to his step-sister. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Thanks again for this story.
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for the review and feedback! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, especially all the mind games Haley has played already. Hope the rest continues to satisfy as I add to it!
Date: July 19 2026 4:07 AM Title: Stress Relief
Now this story is starting too look amazing. I love the buildup, and am very keen for the next few chapters. Love your work, one of the best writers out there!
Author's Response:
Heyo, thanks so much for the review and feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the setup so far, hope it continues to satisfy as it develops further.
And thanks so much for the shoutout, you're too kind but that really means a ton to me to know that my stuff stands out for folks reading out there!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2026 3:52 PM Title: Stress Relief
Really love the pacing here, and honestly everything else about the story. Great stuff, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Hope the pacing and the build-up is helping build the tension nicely, and that the action gets even more enjoyable once things get rolling!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2026 11:18 AM Title: A Tense Household
Love this so far X)
[Report This]Date: July 16 2026 11:16 AM Title: Proof of Concept
I love this so far X)
Author's Response:
Heyo, thanks for the review and feedback! Glad it's a good read so far.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2026 9:01 PM Title: A Tense Household
I hope you continue this story for a long time
cant wait to read how Haley implements her plan
Author's Response:
Hey there! Thanks for reading and for sharing your feedback, I'm glad it's been an enjoyable read so far.
I definitely do have a long-term arc planned out for it, so there will hopefully be lots of satisfying plot to play out in it yet to come.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2026 10:47 PM Title: Background Research
You really are a devious kind of writer.. Evan is definitely in some pretty seriously trouble, I expect.....
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks! I hope it's a good kind of devious at least! Hard to beat the heat that a little trickery and subterfuge adds to a story sometimes.
And for sure, things very much may go in a different direction than he was expecting.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2026 12:11 AM Title: A Tense Household
Looking forward to seeing where this goes, love this kind of setup
Really enjoying your writing
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad it's off to a good start, and I appreciate your kind words; always love to hear when my stuff is hitting well for anyone!
Hope it continues to deliver as I add to it.
Date: June 16 2026 8:13 PM Title: A Tense Household
Absolutely love this set up! Looks like Evan may be in for quite the surprise
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad it's off to a good start. And you're not wrong, it's obviously telegraphed to the extreme, but I'm nothing if not a sucker for the dramatic irony of getting to watch a character have no idea quite what's coming :)
[Report This]Date: June 16 2026 1:56 AM Title: A Tense Household
Really enjoyed this, a good start and a fun dynamic with the two of them. Also glad to see you back. I've missed seeing your stories updated the last couple weeks
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Always love when things are getting off to a good start :)
And yeah, real life has intruded a bit in and slowed down my writing pace a bit, but I still have a lot of ideas planned I want to get on the page. Not to mention finishing all the existing stories I've spread myself thin over, haha. So more to come for sure, even if it might not be as fast as at some points! I always appreciate your feedback and kind words!